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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-10-31 10:44 AM


This is what I did

Passions are the essence of our core
Expressions the lance and shield.
While some feel less and others feel more.
Only actions bare the yield.

So there she was in a field of green
Plucking love me or love me not.
And I beside her this wooded scene
Waiting answers of begot.

But the last one plucked a love me not
I shouted denials scream.
And we laugh and hugged in counterplot
Just to counter chances theme.

Then I filled her mind with the honey's sweet
Swore my love in verse and rhyme
Kissed and hugged her and tickled her feet.
Held her to the end of time.


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-31 10:48 AM


Seymour~ ***SIGH*** this is SO romantic.........LOVE THIS!!   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-10-31 10:50 AM


Oh, it is resplendent upon you, for what you did in the face of fate and fickle flowers!  Well done!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2000-10-31 01:52 PM


Sea,
Thank you for the big sigh.

Sunshine,
You can't believe fickle flowers. *L*

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Seymour~ you earned it!   -SEA
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5 posted 2000-10-31 02:39 PM


Seymour~
When I emit these long *sighhhhhhhhhs* at work ...
they think I actually like being here !

You amaze me yet !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2000-10-31 04:04 PM


Sea,
Once again thank you.

Marge,
I could hear the sigh all the way here. LOL *L*. Sy

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-10-31 05:14 PM


To kiss sweet fate ... before its too late
dance with destiny ... grant it to be our reality
to take a chance ... and find sweet romance
pick the rose of love ... fly on wings of dove
write the perfect line ... let the rhyme define
compose the captivating verse ... let poetry be our curse
let poetic grace ... all our sorrows to chase
let our written word ... be all that is ever heard


put poets pen to the test ... never let our muse rest
look at you  ... look at me ... the reflection of we ...
all our eyes should see ... is poetry.

*****

*winkie winkie*
Love "what ya did"...
love seeing you do that thing you do  
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8 posted 2000-10-31 11:14 PM



OHHH this is fantastic!! Loved the
"silliness" of this weave...a perfect moment
shared by lovers...laughter and love go hand
in hand...especially when you are in it for
the long haul...excellent~

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-10-31 11:20 PM


Another precious jewel of a poem that I will remember
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2000-11-01 08:20 AM


JM,
Your talent and answers never cease to amaze me. Winkiewinkie. Sy

Butterfly,
Thank you so much for the excellent.

Elizabeth,
Precious is a wonderful word. Sy

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