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This Is What I Did
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This Is What I Did |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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This is what I did Passions are the essence of our core Expressions the lance and shield. While some feel less and others feel more. Only actions bare the yield. So there she was in a field of green Plucking love me or love me not. And I beside her this wooded scene Waiting answers of begot. But the last one plucked a love me not I shouted denials scream. And we laugh and hugged in counterplot Just to counter chances theme. Then I filled her mind with the honey's sweet Swore my love in verse and rhyme Kissed and hugged her and tickled her feet. Held her to the end of time. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ ***SIGH*** this is SO romantic.........LOVE THIS!!  -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, it is resplendent upon you, for what you did in the face of fate and fickle flowers! Well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Thank you for the big sigh. Sunshine, You can't believe fickle flowers. *L* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ you earned it! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ When I emit these long *sighhhhhhhhhs* at work ... they think I actually like being here ! You amaze me yet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Once again thank you. Marge, I could hear the sigh all the way here. LOL *L*. Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To kiss sweet fate ... before its too late dance with destiny ... grant it to be our reality to take a chance ... and find sweet romance pick the rose of love ... fly on wings of dove write the perfect line ... let the rhyme define compose the captivating verse ... let poetry be our curse let poetic grace ... all our sorrows to chase let our written word ... be all that is ever heard put poets pen to the test ... never let our muse rest look at you ... look at me ... the reflection of we ... all our eyes should see ... is poetry. ***** *winkie winkie* Love "what ya did"... love seeing you do that thing you do  later-picking-poetic-posies-gator me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 OHHH this is fantastic!! Loved the "silliness" of this weave...a perfect moment shared by lovers...laughter and love go hand in hand...especially when you are in it for the long haul...excellent~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Another precious jewel of a poem that I will remember Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your talent and answers never cease to amaze me. Winkiewinkie. Sy Butterfly, Thank you so much for the excellent. Elizabeth, Precious is a wonderful word. Sy |
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