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I'm Outta Here!
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I'm Outta Here! |
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
I'm Outta Here! I've waited for years To be able to say Just three little words On that final day. A plan is in motion Setting up the getaway There'll be a comotion On that final day. Whether dismal or clear On that final day "I'm outta here" Will be all that I say! Beacon of Hope! Your guiding light during life's troubling moments. www.yourbeaconofhope.com |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
very nice. enjoyed the read, makes me want to join you as you leave. Looking forward to seeing more. |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
As I read this poem, I am reminded of the convincing I have to lend myself to make certain decisions. Plans have to be drawn to get me to the place were I can say 'I'm Outta Here!', sometimes they are difficult to do - it feels a bit like a release day from prison, when you finally make the break. Thanks, nice one Jon |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
startin_fresh, good on ya both for the write and the intention. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Let me tell you, it's a GREAT feeling to say that! There's a twinge of sadness too, at walking away from so many dreams and promises, but oftentimes, it's necessary for our survival. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
This has a lot of zip! Glad to see your confidence and your mind made up.  Good for you! It would have been  (sad) if you have no choice. Good Luck, whatever you decide. Connie |
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