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A Sepia Sigh
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A Sepia Sigh |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Burn the edges of my words rid them of their sharpened edge dim the light in my dim world a tiptoe's trace too close to ledge... softly blur the lines of verse save me from a screaming pen-- kiss me once upon my head, kiss me, kiss me...once again. Take the lights out of the sky, I'll not see them rise. nothing, nothing can compare the spark within your eyes... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ The PERFECT title ! This is just so lovely ... I like this muse muchly ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Serenity- WOW...i love this.  so beautiful, and i agree with Marge...perfect title. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is as close to perfection as it gets. Serenity, I could kiss you once upon your head  |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
"Take the lights out of the sky, I'll not see them rise. nothing, nothing can compare the spark within your eyes..." This my dear is hot. Have we been creating fires? Rich |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a tiptoe's trace too close to ledge... softly blur the lines of verse save me from a screaming pen-- kiss me once upon my head, kiss me, kiss me...once again. Take the lights out of the sky, I'll not see them rise. nothing, nothing can compare the spark within your eyes... ===================== OH man do I adore this one... YES ditto margie .. this muse of late is awesome ... Sen this is exquisite.. one of my most favs me thinks.... all your poetry of late(months) is written with such a delicate feather lite touch to it... ya make it look sooooo easy...must mean your a poet huh?? better than being a moth *winkiewinkie* keep em coming lovie....I could eat em with a spoon... *kisskiss* me |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
ABSOLUTELY ABSOLUTE.... Great work, O Serene One... Regards, Sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge, I thank you bunches! Hugs and luv to ya lady!!! vicky, thanks also, I love sepia tone... Balladeer, I'm delighted! Rich, no bonfires t'nite. JM---me twin...shaking my head over here...your are something pretty special. Always remember that. Don't let anybody treat ya bad. It's not worth it. Sudhir--I miss you, and your grace in the forum. Thanks for popping in to see me. Hope that all is well with you! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Serenity, such charm in your words...through your sight, we see passion's light. Robert Joseph |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ WOW! I am so liking this......so lovely. -SEA |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This one was like looking into a mystical night...listening to whispers through the pages...beautiful and so serene dear S'en... love ya poet girl! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh girl this is sooooooooo great. I had to go back and read it over and over again. This is going in my library if that's ok with you. Hugs, Juls |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yeah...right into my private library it goes...this is marvelous |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I "pictured" this to be much different because of the title, but I like what I found... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
RJ---thank you much for the 'charm' of your reply! SEA--Great big forum hugs to YOU, lady...and luv to you as well. You've been a friend, and I thank you. Holly--I miss ya much. Drop me an 'e', will ya? (GRIN) Juls--that's such a compliment, I do surely thank you. Paula--sweet of you as well, m'friend...I do thank you also. Karilea...much grats...and I do love just typing your name...no wonder you write such musical poetry...there's a song in your very name. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Serenity, this is exquisite a lovely poem my friendCoco |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
very sensual, nice Emily |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now you knew that I would like this one. . . wonderful my friend. . . almost. . . Romantic. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very, very nice. I enjoyed muchly. Wonderful poetry. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very well done. I enjoyed reading it. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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