Open Poetry #10 |
--- What Seeketh Ye Fair Stranger? --- |
The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
--- What Seeketh Ye Fair Stranger? --- If you seek eternal love, Then look to me or God above. If it's strength of heart you seek, Let me hold you when you're weak. When you long for loving care, You won't look long till I am there I've looked high and wide for you But now I don't know what to do. I can give you all of me But cannot give you eyes to see. Some men see things as they are and ask "WHY ?" I see things as they could be and ask "WHY NOT ?" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
TLS~ "When you long for loving care, You won't look long till I am there" I liked this a lot -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
then give your heart that's where you start next, give your soul to make that life whole and when those are recieved you'll have a true love indeed Excellent my friend. . . she'll see. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
TLS, This is a nice poem, but it so sad to read: - 'I can give you all of me But cannot give you eyes to see.' Best wishes Jon |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is beautiful...may I add? I shall give thee recompense when all emotion has been spent and I shall dry thy tears for thee e'en tho thy eyes cannot see and e'en tho I've given thee my heart for all eternity... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
TLS, this is beautiful, sad but beautiful. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
poignant, sad but also very lovely words of love. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*....wonderful words from a sensitive heart.....love it very much Charisma |
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