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jlocke
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0 posted 2000-10-30 01:02 PM



Smile
Amongst people
I smile
But there's something
Something I hide
Inside
Deep Inside
Inside I cry
I cry
And I cry
Love
I found love
But why
Why hasn't love
Love found me
Why
I continue to cry
To cry
And to cry…
But all the while
I smile


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AniKay83
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1 posted 2000-10-30 01:08 PM


I too, have a habit of smiling, when I feel like crying. I cry through my words, never my eyes. Feel better.

Much love all,
Krissie

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2 posted 2000-10-30 01:09 PM


I've felt this way before.....such an ache inside...such wanting.....excellent write.   -SEA
Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2000-10-30 01:15 PM


Perhaps, it is who you are rather than what you feel expressed on your smiling face...  Bob <><
Charisma
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4 posted 2000-10-30 02:58 PM


mm...sounds like me

with a smile,
I hide the cry inside,
no one can see the tears
when they appears,
flowing from out within,
with no end no begin.
unvisible for the eye,
but yet I cry.

yes you pennend it right up from your heart..
((warm hugs))

Take care...Charisma

Paula Finn
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5 posted 2000-11-01 12:38 PM


Jeremy...sometimes the only way to get thru the day is to smile...even when it hurts...dont let them see how bad they hurt you...dont give them the satisfaction
Rosebud1229
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6 posted 2000-11-01 12:46 PM


When you smile guess what? Someone else is smiling with you .. so don't give up, keep that smile and with that smile you'll notice a little gleam and pretty soon you'll notice it's contagious, so don't give up!
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