Open Poetry #10 |
For Catalina's Tears... |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
When Tears...Are Shed A day like today brings those "tears" to my eyes. The first tears this morning were due to those "lies". But later this day, as my afternoon came, The tears that I shed were "relief" once again. Then as hours went by and I spoke with a friend, The drop that came tearing was from "laughter on end". And by the time we had finished, and talking was done, The last tears were shed from the loss of just "one". **it's ok to shed a few...for the fond memories and for your "loss" ~Wynter [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nakdthoughts, Tearful poem, well written, I liked it a lot. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Such true thoughts; wonderfully written and some great reminders here too Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, thanks for reading and understanding my poem, and dedicating this little gem to me. How sweet. I know tears can be good on occasion, I am just looking to put mine away now, and they are uncooperative. Take care Sandra / catalinamoon |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I hate it when tears won't listen. . . Wonderful poem Wynter. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kethry- Happy to have a visit from you. Thanks peppermint- thank you for your kind words Sandra- my days are often like that and I never know when the tears will flow and cleanse my thoughts. huggz ( and I enjoy being inspired by your thoughts and writing because of them Sven- hmmm I love the phrase "when tears won't listen". I feel another poem coming on Be on the look out for it and thank you, Sven very much!! ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey Wynter, this is great! Very thoughtful of you!! Love it!! sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Snowpants- what a cute name. Thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Wynter... very nicely penned my compliments to you Coco |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
My thanks to you coco ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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