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Broken_Winged_Angel
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Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-10-30 05:09 AM


A little child cries at night
Lost and all alone
Her parents refuse to see the tears
It's a home without a home

Her daddy drinks away his pay
Gambling through out the night
Her mom works and doesn't look
At the reasons for her fright

Her daddys fist swings hard
Connecting as she cries for help
The little dog trys to save her
Sadly she hides her welts

Another family member comes to stay
Her hope begins to fade
By night she hides in the shadows
By day she deals with rape

Her tears begin to dry
She finds strength within herself
Taking the days one by one
She quits asking for any help

Struggling to survive
Through the cold days alone
She keeps a secret hope alive
Looking for a home within a home.

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It's not how much money you have, or how nice your house is, but how much love is inside the house that makes it a home...Be thankful for what ever you have, because there's always someone who doesn't share in your fortune...Thankyou.


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With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.  


[This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 10-30-2000).]

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
1 posted 2000-10-30 05:38 AM


This is an amazing piece...you wove such
deep sorrow and then left a glimmer of light
at the end...your closing statement says it
all....*Angel Wing Hugs* to you~

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
2 posted 2000-10-30 07:01 AM


you describe it so well, the feelings from a home without home.....and it hit home....
and you have right, material and being nice can't never take the place over from love.
True love we can't buy, only share and make us feel home.
thanks for sharing...

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

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