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The Naked True |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 The Naked True! Enclosed tight, by your arms, I'm melting light, in seductive charms, smouldering fire, a heartbeat away, passions inspire, my love for thee, flowing in harmony, exploring the line, of our sensuality, passionately entwine, full of anticipation, more desire appear, sharing vibration, intimacy adhere, killing me softly, in the naked true, I'm so eagerly, united with you, so lead me firmly into burning love. Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOWZERS!!!!!!!!! Leading firmly but softly with this one. Is it me or does it feel like summer just hit again. Must be that cause the temperature just went up about 40 degrees in here. ========================== flowing in harmony, exploring the line, of our sensuality, passionately entwine, full of anticipation, more desire appear, sharing vibration, ========================== You gotta know that I love these lines especially....HOT for sure. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my...Mark....maybe your fireplace stir up the warmth...mmmm...which fireplace....hehehe...that is your naked true... and yeah I love the same lines too.... Hugs ~Marge~ thank you  ...((hugs)) [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
W O O H O O !!! Now THIS is passion! I told you I was ready! Now I'm MORE than ready! Fantastic writing! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'm melting light, in seductive charms, smouldering fire, a heartbeat away, passions inspire, my love for thee, flowing in harmony, exploring the line, of our sensuality, passionately entwine, full of anticipation, more desire appear, sharing vibration, intimacy adhere, killing me softly, in the naked true, --------------- whew..it tis heating up in the forums for sure... this is excellent and dressed to kill in its sensual grace... youve expressed your desires very well.. very well indeed take care jm |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Balladeer: Ready for what hon ? ~~~~innocent smile~~~~~well I told you.....the next wave was for you..... thank you for your passionately reply JM: Thank you for stopping by....I'm always glad to have a reply from you, I appreciated that very much. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
WOW! This is fantastic. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Wow, left me speehless did this one Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Wow you sizzled me. Good thing a lot of us are bare naked poets, as someone suggested, or else we'd have to shed some garmets, due to the heat. Nice job. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ You have outdone yourself here!!! WHEW!! I was going to build a fire in the wood stove but it just kept getting hotter and hotter as I read!! LOVE THIS!!   -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Just one word - This is.... INTENSE |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mmm, very nice..sweet and seductive and happy. Happy is so nice..Enjoy this.. Sandra |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Intensly Passionate....A brilliant write!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Dee: thank you for your fantastic reply....love it Marie B:hope that you refound your voice... your speechless told me all.... Ron: IC..you allready been dressed to kill.... Sea: thank you hon....I am glad that you love this one...its always a pleasure to have your comment... Nan: Intense....yeah...I agree with that thanks for stopping by Catalinamoon: you have right, happyness incluud. Beth: thank you.....love your comment. |
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