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Rainydays
Member

since 2000-10-21

Posts 324

0 posted 2000-10-29 10:53 PM

"The Crimson of the Day"

Within this world
of hurried whirr
and promise penned
I move about
until the day
approaches end

And all the while
your words a
balming sweet allay
encase my mind
throughout the
crimson of the day

And there at dusk,
with thickened
vision growing dim
your voice, my love,
an angel's breath
upon my skin

Rainydays

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-10-29 10:58 PM

quote:
your voice, my love,
an angel's breath
upon my skin

I loved those lines...I feel the same way. Another gem, Rainydays.

Elizabeth

You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

2 posted 2000-10-29 11:03 PM

The sweet tender feel of this poem sings to
the soul...this is beautiful and your
closing lines wrapped it nicely in the glow
of a sunset~

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-29 11:08 PM

I love your poems.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-10-30 01:18 AM

RainyDays~
Such lovely images inspire.

When the crimson of the day
meets the indigo of the night
All the sky is melting purple
a visual palette of delight

Enjoyed very much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Toddles
Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana

5 posted 2000-10-30 01:20 AM

Simply Magical!

"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind!"...Dr. Seuss

Toddles123@aol.com

Rainydays
Member

since 2000-10-21

Posts 324

6 posted 2000-10-30 11:28 AM

Elizabeth, thank you for sharing the lines here that you found the most touching. I'm glad you liked this little piece.

Butterflies Don't Cry, thank you very much for reading and your nice words!

Ron, (smiling) thank you!

Marge, if my words can inspire ones of such poetic countenance as those you have shared, then I am a happy person. Thank you very much!

Toddles, thank you kindly, so glad you enjoyed this!

Rainydays

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