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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
break away stubborn bird i hope your southern flight is rewarding comforting, bordering heaven arena of plumes, pink fire graceful in the very depths of simplicity sigh of my sigh, vapors on the glass (tear-stained-glass) sayonara today-forever just as the flamingo dazzles and displays my every weakness blinding with beauty you do as well glamorous even more in your own eyes i stare out through the years the windows ofthis soul now cracked the rain seeps in feathers on the sill scattered and tossed by restless wind your wings/my prayers separate through your escape go join your V formation I know where you are going off to a new-found love sayonara today-forever "Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind!"...Dr. Seuss |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Melancholy. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
How perceptive... Thanks U! "Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind!"...Dr. Seuss |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
HEY!!!!! You still got me...this is just so sad...HUGS |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Toddles~ This is sad, yet beautiful at the same time. Isn't it amazing how poetry can allow you to feel all these wonderful emotions at once? Thank you for sharing this one. I love it! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Ty Paula, as always! Terry, True indeed & thanks for the love! www.ToddMichaelPhillips.com |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
An excellent write. and beautifully done. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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