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Flame of Love |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Flame of Love" hands touch, hearts begin to soar lips meet, fingertips explore souls become one, passion and desire heat intensifies, flame turns into fire pulses quicken, heart beat turns fast praying to God, this night will always last true love has been found, tis the case as bodies move closer, minimizing space risking it all, taking the chance as eyes lock passionately, in a love dance no words are spoken, just escaping of sighs nothing but truth is told, no bitter-sweet lies souls touch, spirit flies heavens jejoice, an angel cries tears of joy, cascade all around as the love of a lifetime, finally found ~amy kennedy~ ***dedicated to laura--the love of my life*** [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
What a wonderful way to say "I love you." Sometimes simple never says enough. Much love all, Krissie |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A beautiful love you have, two butterflies dancing on the wind,flowing, drifting. A wonderful dedication Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~A beautiful way of expressing love...I enjoyed this!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Aimster~ Wonderful to read, very romantic and sweet. You have expressed yourself well  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I don't know that I have the right words to desribe this but one that comes to mind is Perfect! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
risking it all, taking the chance as eyes lock passionately, in a love dance no words are spoken, just escaping of sighs nothing but truth is told, no bitter-sweet lies Amy, you have captured it perfectly! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, this is beautiful, and yes yes yes that is how it feels. You've written this so amazingly well, I really love this one, a prize beauty. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
a passionately tribute for your love....penned with love and desire... you have expressed your feelings very well. love it.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thank you all for your heartfelt and beautiful replies. you guys always know how to make a girl smile for that i thank you! love ya, ~amy~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, you know how much I love to read your writing. . . especially now. . . This is no exception. . . it's just beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
This was a beautiful poem. She's very lucky to have you in her life. passion is life. . . |
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