Open Poetry #10 |
Shadows of the Night |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The fear begins with shadows of the night. Shadows that cause lost souls to be filled with fright. Shadows dancing on the wall not knowing if their real, wondering if it will devour you or will you become it's next meal. Hearing rattling windows and such a ghastly sound, making your mind race and your heart begins to pound. Are demons waiting there hidden in the murk? Are they around every corner, do you wonder where they lurk? Your heart becomes filled with fear you pray for the morning light, you can run, but you can not hide from the shadows of the night. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very appropriate for the season, Gentle Spirit. I wouldn't like to run into one of those shadows... Elizabeth< !signature--> You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth [This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Now I'M GONNA HAVE TO SLEEP WITH THE LIGHT ON AGAIN. OCTOBER IS ALWAYS MY HIGHEST ELECTRIC BILL. NICE READ.BOO. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Gentle Spirit, Spooky, spooky verse!! Just perfect for the chill of these shadowy autumn nights! Thank you ~ Rainydays (turning on a night light!) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Perfect descriptions of the shadows that lurk in our nights. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent GS. . . They are everywhere. . . watching us. . . this one gives me a chill. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
GS~ this is really great and perfect for this time of year!! -SEA |
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