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One Who Needs You
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One Who Needs You |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
You've captured a heart, My Precious One. You've won the devotion Of one who needs you, My Dear Friend. Since the moment I saw you, I've only wanted to be close to you, To fall asleep in your arms. I just need to have you For my own, From now until forever, Where time neither exists nor ceases. Whatever I might have said About what I needed in love Is all irrelevant now. You see, without even trying, You've captured a heart, My Precious One, And you've won the devotion Of one who needs you, My Dear Friend. Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I hope someone special is listening. very heartwarming poem her snow. thanks for sharing your feelings. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
SP* Such a delicate penning of your heart in this piece...I enjoyed the circle of love you wove, beautiful work~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris-- this is written with such tender beauty. lovely heart you have that shines through! if this is to some- one in particular i hope they feel the same about you and if its to noone beautiful nonetheless. take care my friend, ~Amy~  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhhh, such a lovely piece from you and such a tender way of showing your heart to a friend. Beautiful poem from you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I would be thrilled if someone wrote this for me! I loved it! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very special expression of love. Stay happy. Sandra |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Snowpants~ gentle, loving and so very sweet.......  -SEA |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
snow~they are lucky & this is special~ Marcy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I, too know this feeling, snowpants Holding Me Captive Within your power you hold me captive through a touch of poetic my desires, you milk. Drawn to your dancing slowly and tempting you capture my heart in a web made of silk. Weaving a gown though invisible, it cloaks me surrounds me with passions heating my wild. Creating an agony the pain from the loving the pleasures of wanting like that of a child. My senses are drifting your always in my mind with glint of a smile that I see in your eyes. With hint of the laughter when watching each movement and listening to words that escape with my sighs. You hold me captive with silken touch webbing forever you've woven your heartstrings in mine. Each new day awakens my wantings of pleasure escaping them, never, a life of divine. ~Wynter I hope your friend enjoys your words "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This is truly lovely!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Snowpants, As one who needs you, let me say I truly enjoyed this piece. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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SouthernStar Junior Member
since 2000-10-30
Posts 23Georgia |
Yes gentle is how I would describe this. So full of tenderness. My heart has been touched. Wonderful poem. Tessa |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Very nice |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
thank you all for your kind words! sorry it took so long to reply, but here they are: Ron: I hope so, too! and thanks for reading! butterflies: well, thank you for your kind comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Amy: thank you, my friend, for your thoughtful words! it was actually for someone a while back, but could be applied again these days!!  Mark: ahhh, thank you for those words, my friend! I'm glad you could stop by!!  Kathleen: well, thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!! Sandra: thank you for reading! and you do the same, ya hear?? SEA: thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!! Marcy: I hope 'they' think the same way! and thanks for reading!! Wynter: how can I thank you for the beautifully poetic reply!! 'You hold me captive with silken touch webbing forever you've woven your heartstrings in mine.' some beautiful lines, my friend. Thanks again!! Beth: thanks! glad you liked!! Kethry: awwww, that is so sweet of you! I'm glad you stopped by!! Tessa: I'm glad I could have some nice effect on your heart! thanks!! vandana: thanks! glad you liked!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
...Happy Halloween....!!!!! and poems go BUMP in the middle of the night. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
ooh, spooky!!  well, thanks, Mark! 'preciate the bump!! sp |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
SP, this is beautifully written, it touched my heart Truly, you satisfy a need every time you take your pen in hand.Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
snowpants, Such beautiful amd moving words of love. You express yourself so well, I can feel your heart beating and your tender embrace. Great poem. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sweet warm poem, you have captured it with warm love.....hope that he capture this poem either, and that love will fill his heart for you..... well done. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
pepper: wow! thank you so much for the high compliments!! I am glad I could give something back to you! Daniel: well, my friend, thank you, too, for your kind words! I'm glad to see you!! Charisma: thanks, to you, too! I'm glad you stopped by and enjoyed!! sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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