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I'm no Poet
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I'm no Poet |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I’m no poet I don’t have enough brains To make a go of it I’m no poet All I do is Sit around and fantasize About the riding the moon high in the sky I’m no poet I don’t know how to tease you I surely don’t know how to please you I do know this I can make you cry If I really want to try I can make you smile By going a very short mile I can make you feel sorry for me When there is really no reason to be I can turn you on, turn you loose Or make you think I’m as crazy as a goose I can make you mad But me a poet Nope, not a chance Not even a free lance |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes you are!!!!!!! Loved this one, Alan, but I have to disagree with you......you are definitely a poet!!!  Follow your dream! |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
It appears to me, Alan, that you "have" freed your lance (ahem ~ poetically speaking, of course). Gosh, this sure reads like poetry to me. (smiling) Thanks! Rainydays |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Aha ... but you've just proved that you are Alan! Once bitten by the bug, 'tis difficult to deny. A wonderful read ...  Best wishes, /Kit |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
If you're not, I don't know what one is!!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Me thinks you are a poet ... yet you just dont know it your poets pen has served you well this poem is the proof that serves to tell you have written a gifted verse enjoy fellow poet.. poetry is now your curse ================= excellent work here Alan... enjoyed the premise behind this one very creative take care jm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
:Þ...you are such a tease...hehehe |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
You are a poet, But you just don't know it? Come now my friend, When were you failed by your pen? Your words seem to flow, So how could you not know? You're a poet as sure as there's beer in a keg. If you're not a poet Someone's pulling my leg! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well maybe your aren't a poet, and you just haven't show it, maybe you could make me cry, don't think that you would lie, maybe you really can't tease me, or even not able to please me, but what you have is fantasy, using that is already heavenly, sitting around and penned this to show it, geez,thinking that this sound if you were a poet. *Hugs*.....don't worry hon, I aint no poet either...*though* |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you everyone for your kind words and you time you gave to read. Alan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
First post I've disagreed with in some time!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Now Irish....why would you disagree with it? |
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SouthernStar Junior Member
since 2000-10-30
Posts 23Georgia |
Well I'm no expert but you seem like a poet to me. Very nice work here. Tessa |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
..get otta here..talk about a ham great job my POET friend...and you brought a smile.Marcy |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Southern Star I enjoyed writing it Alle'cram.thank you....glad it got a smile |
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