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Some do and some don't
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Some do and some don't Our lives are like a catalogue Of all that we have said and done. A little like a travelogue Directed by the skies and sun. We try to do the best we can And some succeed and some do not. And some will try to make a plan And some will do and some will not. But all are affable in dream Where the impossible is done. For this is where we plan and scheme Regardless of the sky or sun. And I have sailed this argosy Have scaled outrageous facts of go Have sung the song of primacy Sewed aspires ipsofacto. Felt agony and ecstasy In triumph of a fantasy. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very true, Seymour. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
well said, seymour, well said. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Our lives are like a catalogue Of all that we have said and done. A little like a travelogue Directed by the skies and sun ======================== But all are affable in dream Where the impossible is done. For this is where we plan and scheme Regardless of the sky or sun. And I have sailed this argosy Have scaled outrageous facts of go Have sung the song of primacy Sewed aspires ipsofacto. Felt agony and ecstasy In triumph of a fantasy. ========================= *getting out dictionary*  "argosy":a large merchant ship: a fleet of ships **** "ipso facto":by that very fact or act : as an inevitable result **** My eyes danced across this poem of wisdom and grace and its cryptic, cool, message brought a smile to my face and I do so adore poetry that makes me think and I do so adore the way you write and the way you wink and as I searched for the meaning of the words ... defining the things "we do and dont do" in the poets bible by Webster...next to Wisdom and Cool ... I just had to smile ... for there I found a picture of you. *winkiewinkie* THIS POEM ROCKS and is one of my new favs of yours...way cool dont touch it... but this poem is just so very cool in its deliverance and its wisdom. yet another one for my SY-GUY files... under C for COOOOOL.. later-so-very-wise-gator me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and I will dream the impossible dream, too... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Seymour, the affable, in dream...yes, but are we not? Lovely verse. Please count me as a fan? Thank you! Rainydays |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
For dreams can come true. . . if we only believe. . . Excellent Sy. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Seymour - VERY well done sir- VERY |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Thank you for the nice coment. Ron, thanks for the well said. JM, Thank you for the beautiful poetic answer. You write such cool replies. winkiewinkie me to me. *L* Sy Sunshine, Very clever, *L* Rainyday, Love you as a fan and thanks for the lovely. Sven, Thanks for the excellent. Wilfred, Thanks for the very. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So THAT'S why you married a travel agent!! Clever writing, Sy.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Man ... you DO ! And I gotta love a poet that can work ipsofacto into his rhyme scheme ! You are just the bestest !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
perfectly stated... this poem has to be a design for life... "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
very true....indeed. Excellent penned. Charisma |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Seymour, is this where Nike got their inspiration from for their Just do it slogan? I loved it much. Dee< !signature--> I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Felt agony and ecstasy In triumph of a fantasy." Been there tried that... ... and I'd do it again Nice work, Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Blabbermouth. LOL Marge, And so are you. *L* Brian, A stunning comment. Thanks Charisma, Thanks for the excellence. Dee, Don't know, but thanks. Nan, Love Ya. Sy |
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