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Dressing Down |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Dressing Down Sitting here in my naked thoughts, letting them warm my cold. Dressing down, this lonely night, myself becoming bold. Wondering now, if skin to skin feelings would soon take hold, When offering myself to you, a blending to unfold. Resting in my naked thoughts, a stirring taking place. Inside desires rising up, at mystifying pace. Visions forming photo-like, filling nighttimes space, Wondering if these thoughts of you my morning light, shall grace. ~Wynter Bliss |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 An exquisite entrance to Passions...Welcome and I'm looking forward to many more from you in the future~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most lovely entry into Passions, Welcome! Please check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions. Thank goodness we don't need to be dressed to write poetry! Depending on where you live it could be cold though. Look forward to reading more! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Nakdthoughts! What a beautiful first post ... a lovely flow complimented by such tender sentiments. I hope to read more!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
BDC- thank you for the lovely welcome *S Karilea (Sunshine) what a beautiful name- I enjoyed the card very much, it was sweet of you. Kathleen (Irish Rose)- oh it's a bit brisk this morning..I did have to layer myself a bit. *smiling* ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
What an absolutely inspiring read!!! Looking forward to more....soon! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Resting in my naked thoughts, a stirring taking place. Inside desires rising up, at mystifying pace. Visions forming photo-like, filling nighttimes space, Wondering if these thoughts of you my morning light, shall grace. ================ Hi and add my welcome to the list .. this is an excellent poem very cool rhyme scheme ... perfect cadence and flow and I love the sensual flavor of it... well expressed longing ... very nice work... I look forward to more of your words, its so nice to meet you take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Welcome to Passions..love the poem..you will love it here..enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome to Passions. You will enjoy the talent and friendship here. A lovely entrance you've made. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kit- thank you for your words of kindness. I hope to post more as I compose them. peppermint- how refreshing..*S, thank you. jm- I am happy to please and glad you noticed the meaning behind the written word. ~Victoria~ I know I will enjoy it here. *S Marge- thank you for the inviting welcome. I look forward to reading other's words. Thank you one and all, for such a nice warm welcome. ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This is sweet and yet shows so much passion. Welcome you will fit right in! |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Good morning, I admire the way in which you have brought these intimate thoughts to such rhythmic verse, the rhythm serving to add even more depth to the sensuality of the piece. A lovely poem, thank you. Rainydays |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
inot2b- thank you for the fitting in remark.*s Rainydays- thank you very much for the kind words and warm welcome...I love Mondays...how about you? (I have a craft business called Rainy Days 'n Mondays) *S ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nakdthoughts- WELCOME!! I know you're going to love it here at Passions. great entrance you've made with this wonderful poem...i look forward to reading lots more from you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting to read dressed down...ha...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions!!!! You have made an excellent entrance with this piece and I look forward to seeing many more. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions....great entrance have you made..... .will look out for more.Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome. A most sensuous and beautiful entrance into passion(s). Corinne |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A lovely poem indeed...welcome...and pull the shades down (peeking neighbors).Wynter Bliss...a lovely name. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~vicky- thank you very much *s James- you mean you dressed down for the occasion?  Mark- thank you for the nice welcome ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Charisma and Corinne- thank you both for the welcome. I look forward to reading many wonderful poems on here. Ron- Was that you I saw looking down from the hill...My, My, I better close those blinds next time. Thank you for the "lovely". ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
HI Wynter Bliss, This is so wonderful and the title I love, thank you for sharing, I enjoyed so much. Welcome to Passions its wonderful to have you here. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Cerenity- Thank you. What a wonderful welcome from you. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Wynter, I guess I missed this before, what a great first post. I have enjoyed everything of yours I have read. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
How sweet Sandra, thank you I hope today was a better day for you. I just wrote a poem called When Tears Won't Listen (an idea inspired by Sven in Dark Passions, based on your poem I wrote for you "When Tears ...Are Shed". huggz~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
First of all, Wynter, WELCOME! A beautiful entrance. This was simple, but in fact distinctive. And I love the title .~ Beth |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Hi there. I just got here too. But I think that you'll find that this is a really wonderful place. I know that I have. Great poem. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very sweet entree you have penned and shared I look forward to plenty more! A most enjoyable read  Coco |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
I'm new too, but I'm fully clothed! Emily |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beth- thank you for the kind welcome. Passions Voice- yes, I am already finding it to be very pleasant reading here. Coco- thank you for enjoying. Emily- Too cute, well somedays I am dressed more than others.thank you all for the warmth in your words. ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It was great reading this Maureen, and also to "feel" where your poetic "handle" came from. Welcome about nine years too late |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Well it ws soooo long ago, Sharon, I am not sure I even remember writing this~~~ but thank you~~ and yes my name really isn't anything "bad" although I do get some very strange emails to it, but was meant to be my "bare" thoughts as they come to me...not too "dressed" up.  M |
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