Open Poetry #10 |
Arguments with a muse |
Eilidh Junior Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 30 |
The sun went down ages ago Why am I still up, I really must know? NO TIME TO NOTE THE H'RS FLOWN BY GET THIS DOWN OR YOU WILL CRY. This is the end, I must give up I need sleep, or coffee in my cup. COFFEE IT IS, YOU REALLY MUST STAY 5 MORE PAGES, THEN I'LL GO AWAY. 5 more pages is more then gone Still you continue to whisper so long. JUST A BIT MORE I PROMISE TO BOOM I'LL HAVE A HOLIDAY WHEN DEADLINES DO LOOM. I'm a slave to the pen from dust 'til dawn I should have been born in vampiric form. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
this is an interesting inter-dialog ... logical, but entertaining ... nice |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh my...I think our muses must be related...why else would I be sitting here at this time of night LOL |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eilidh, boy can I relate to this. Great poem be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Eilidh Junior Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 30 |
Thanks all. The muse likes late hours for all of us it seems "There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Muses sometimes hide when the rush of the 'day job' consumes... what more perfect time than night then lol? Good write. K "He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Great poem Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes, late hours, early hours, peeking into dreams and hot-water showers... they take over, don't they! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
she's been pestering me too. nice write. |
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Eilidh Junior Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 30 |
Muses pester all of us. And like I said take a holiday when you really need them (IE deadlines looming) Thanks all. So happy you could relate to this. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Cute!!!! Send her my way will you?? Enjoyable read!!! Take Care, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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