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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

0 posted 2000-10-29 01:07 AM

thought process ...

a newborn thought
strains for its
first breath

in its amniotic fluid
safety was
protocol

no body to judge
or dogma
to curb

no theorem to prove
or rhythm
to move

only genesis
of its own
process

M.A. Miller
10.28.00

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.

AniKay83
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since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

1 posted 2000-10-29 01:32 AM

Very interesting, got my thought process moving.

Much love all,
Krissie

~*Those words...
Oh, how I long to hear
...those words
Tell me...*~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-10-29 01:39 AM

MA Miller,
I like this only genesis of its own process.
Be well
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2000-10-29 05:29 AM

If was I had to select my favourite lines I would end up pasting the whole poem, excellent poem, loved the wording, imagery and rhythm.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2000-10-29 06:18 AM

yes, a most difficult move, this birthing process...

well done!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2000-10-29 06:23 AM

a newborn thought
strains for its
first breath

beautifully expressed, enjoyed
~Wynter Bliss

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2000-10-29 09:15 AM

"only genesis
of its own
process"

love these lines..

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

7 posted 2000-10-29 10:26 AM

thanks all above for reading ... this is one of those odd two minute drills i go through ever-so-often ... thanks again ...

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
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8 posted 2000-10-29 10:34 AM

What a wonderful thought-provoking piece ... I really enjoyed the images and thoughts this brought to mind, nicely written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 10-29-2000).]

Rainydays
Member

since 2000-10-21

Posts 324

9 posted 2000-10-29 10:59 AM

Hello, M.A. The birthing of thought...what an imaginative poem commemorating an often traumatic awakening. (grin) Thanks for this one!

Rainydays

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

10 posted 2000-10-29 05:02 PM

remarkably brilliant. Need I say more?

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

11 posted 2000-10-29 05:02 PM

remarkably brilliant. Need I say more?

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

12 posted 2000-10-30 12:21 PM

thanks again to all above for taking the time to read ...

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