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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-10-28 06:35 PM





The Dirty Chore

This bloody night will see no light
the good ole boys done took their flight
all thats left is you and me
will do no good to beg or plead

Take a bag of tricks with thee
maybe you'll find a way to flee
you took your chance and knocked on my door
now it's time to do the dirty chore

make you bed
brush your teeth
sweep the floor
then...
you can go Trick or Treat

Love,
Wicked Stepmom hehehehehehehe



BR



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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-10-28 06:54 PM


haa..this is so cute..loved it..

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


BloomingRose
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2 posted 2000-10-28 08:35 PM


Victoria~ Thanks, glad you like.
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3 posted 2000-10-28 11:44 PM


Okay Bad Mamma!    This is cute!  Marcy
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4 posted 2000-10-28 11:48 PM


BloomingRose~
With tales like this ...
you're gonna give step-moms a bad name !
(Like that's gonna change their image !)

Cute little write.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2000-10-28 11:51 PM


HA HA I bet you pass out toothbrushes for Halloween!!

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6 posted 2000-10-28 11:52 PM


Well SOMEONE has to be the wicked witch on Halloween..right???
might as well be mom...
very cute and creative BR ...
and all these graphics are PERFECT for Halloween.
take care
jm

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7 posted 2000-10-28 11:55 PM



Deb-
   terrific as usual.  
   this is really cute...i love it.  

   hugs,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



BloomingRose
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8 posted 2000-10-29 03:53 PM


Marcy~ I hope I am not that bad, although I am a stepmom. lol

Marge~ You know what they say about the wicked step-mom! Since I am a stepmom I figured I may as well live up to it, at least once a year huh? hehehe

Inot~ Now that is a good idea....pass out toothbrushes instead of candy.

JM~ See you agree too huh?  I have to have fun with it! lol

Vicky~ Thanks this was fun!

Mark Bohannan
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9 posted 2000-10-29 04:11 PM


ROFLMBO, What a wonderful wit you have or is this just simply a page from your diary.   Loved it my friend.  So for the holidays, do you need a new broom or is yours in fine working order?( )  You are pretty good at these Halloween ones, you sure this isn't YOUR holiday?

BloomingRose
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10 posted 2000-10-29 09:34 PM


Mark~ Thanks, and yes I DO need a new broom since I have to ride mine from room to room at least once a week!  lol
As for this being my holiday... well I AM having fun sooooooooo who knows? hehehe

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11 posted 2000-10-31 07:55 AM


Halloweeny Bump !!




BloomingRose
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12 posted 2000-10-31 08:38 AM


Thanks Nan~  
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BR~ I'm a step mom and know there isn't much I can do to change my "Witchy" image with the girls .........loved the poem -SEA



BloomingRose
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14 posted 2000-10-31 06:52 PM


SEA~ I can relate, believe me! Thanks for reading and love the pumpkins!
Deb

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