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He's Coming To Take You Away (halloween challenge)
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He's Coming To Take You Away (halloween challenge) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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 ~He's Coming To Take You Away~  He died last Halloween eve the moon glowed but he was blinded by his halloween mask he tripped on a stone and broke all his bones hit his head, and soon he was dead Dragged to the witches dungeon pumped with undead brew he now walks the streets of your city and appears as one of you but... he is one of the UNDEAD  He waits for his yearly trick or treat stew made of bats eyes, and formaldehyde mixed with horse dung and mustard sure don't taste like mama's custard It last a while this grubby brew it's fermenting now, getting ready for you soon he's gonna come after you! then you'll be a member of the UNDEAD CREW BR |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose ! ! This was downright spoOoOoOky ! And man o man ... you learned those graphic applications GREAT !  This was a good one, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
no fair- lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 BR~ LOVE IT!! These poems just get better and better!!  -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 oh..my one of the undead too.....geez... Im outta here...*lol* well done.... Charisma |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- this is awesome! really spooooooky. i like it lots.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good!!! Great use of graphics too! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fantastic, BloomingRose! *shivers up my spine* Challenge well met! Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Yuck, that stew sounded very gross but your ultilization and presentation of the graphics and your words were very yucky good! Nathan |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Oh, my, shivering....I'm scared now and I love it!!!! Wonderful write and wonderful, wonderful graphics!!!! Hugs, Pepper [This message has been edited by peppermint35 (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Eeek! I don't know what's spookier, the thought of the UNdead or the ingredients of the stew! Wonderful, spooky tale BloomingRose, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very spooky my friend!!! So you think we look just like you all do? Why thank you, we do our best. Now if you see this face don't worry, it is only I.  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ Thanks, and what fun I am having! Jamie~ sorry... hehehehehehe SEA~ love the green witch! Chrisma~ Thanks and I like the dancing skelton! Vicky~ Thanks, it's lots of fun these halloween things! PoetD~ Thanks, I am enjoying playing around with the grapics Denise~ Thanks, be watchful for the UNDEAD...hehehehe Nathan~ I tried to make as gross a stew as I could dream up... dung and mustard, my oh my. Pepper~ Thanks, glad you got the spooks, now your ready for a visit from the UNDEAD man....lol Kit~ Thanks, stew is kinda barfy, but thats the general idea! hehehe Mark~ well I hope we don't ALL look that way, lol btw no picture now. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Halloweeny Bump !! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Nan~ Thanks again! |
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