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Charisma
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0 posted 2000-10-28 06:01 PM


my first halloween poem, without knowing the right atmosphere, but hey I like doing it, and with reading all the other halloween poems, have infect me with the Halloween virus  


Whoohoo...whoohoooo...

Once a year I'll coming down,
and play my dark game in your town,
are you prepared for some creepy hours,
while I practice with some magical power,
murmur and stirs in my boiling cauldron,
this evening is mine till the early morn.


Hear the haunting sounds are coming around,
some owls scratching spooky in the background,
the velvet moon shines mysterious this night,
dark shadows dancing slowly in her light.
witches and wizards, spooky's and drakes,
we all are coming, and taking what shakes.


Sulphur and fire, swamp and graves,
hysterical laugh produced by some raves,
while gloomy silhouettes fumbling on your door,
my shrilly laugh is a delighted sore,
when I swallow the atmosphere of mortal fear,
coming....I'm coming to take you my dear.



whoohoo...whoohooooooo....sinister and dreary,
dancing in shadows with passion and fiery,
its you...its you that I want to take,
don't foolish me with another fake,
scratching and haunting in this night,
the fear in the city is a marvelous sight.


Watch out, cause I am the hunter tonight,
one moment of weakness and I take your light,
I am your nightmare, I'll wait in the shadow,
you can recognize me with my malicious scowl,
be aware, cause I'm the bringer off dreary gloom,
and it is my pleasure to spell your doom.


Charisma


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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-10-28 06:08 PM


YEEEEEEEEHHHAAAAAAWWWWWW.....I DO BELIEVE SHE GOT IT!!!!!  What a wonderful entry into the challenge.  You not only penned one hell of a beauty in this but the graphics were superb as well.  I will go out on a limb and say that this is the best entry yet and with all of the wonderful poems that have come out that was no easy task.  I am saving this one so I may enjoy it next year as well.  GREAT WORK!!!!
Ron K. Fox
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2 posted 2000-10-28 09:25 PM


you have charisma and now you ahve the halloween spirit, ghost goblins and ghouls included. What a gal!
inot2B
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3 posted 2000-10-28 09:47 PM


Don't shake the family tree
I'm sure a witch in there will be
You have proved you have the knack
Welcome your now one of the wolf pack

Charisma
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4 posted 2000-10-28 11:17 PM



Mark: *WOW*....this is a great compliment for me, you said it all with that cowboy yell....and I am really honoured that you will save this one.....geez....never thought that I could write a halloween poem.
thanks cowboy  

Ron: thank you for your reply.....and hey you know it....behind my charm.....hiding a lot of scary faces huh....

Inot2b: thank you, I am honoured with the pleasure to be a member of the wolfpack.  

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-10-28 11:22 PM


Wow Charisma ... you're brimming with goulish delights with these Halloween gems! Excellent graphics, and a wonderful eery mood you've set, well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

vlraynes
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6 posted 2000-10-28 11:31 PM



Charisma-
   WOW!!!  You've done an excellent  
   job on this, my friend.  
   Very impressive!  
   I like it lots.
  
   hugs,
   -vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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7 posted 2000-10-29 12:43 PM



Kit: thank you, I'm in the mood now for all these ghouls, its a shame that we don't celebrate it overhere......

vicky: thank you, and I am glad that you like it.....appreciate your reply alot  

tracie66
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8 posted 2000-10-29 01:01 AM


hey there Charisma, you've done an excellent job with this...just so creepy Oooooh
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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9 posted 2000-10-29 11:53 AM


Creepy.  You definitly got the Halloween spirit.  Great poem!


Love is the law, love under will.

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10 posted 2000-10-29 12:12 PM


Yikes!!  

Good ghoulish goings~on!


Rainydays
(looking for someone to hide behind!)

peppermint35
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11 posted 2000-10-29 01:31 PM


You don't celebrate it where you are???  Well, grab your broom and come fly with us!!!  You've definitely got the touch....you captured the spirit perfectly; it really got to me and I love to be scared laughs

Pepper
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12 posted 2000-10-29 05:04 PM


Tracie: thank you for your kind reply....creepy things are on their way....

jlocke: glad that I have the halloween spirit, wished that I could share that here too.....

Rainydays....well on top there is a place you could hide...do you see the house...hehehe  

peppermint: I live in Holland,overhere we don't have halloween,
and thats a nice invitation, I will come over,..just wait.......well were the hell is my broom......

thanks you all for stopping by....

Nan
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13 posted 2000-10-31 07:50 AM


Halloweeny Bump !!




Charisma
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14 posted 2000-10-31 04:38 PM


Thanks Nan..for the halloweeny bump...*lol*

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15 posted 2000-11-02 01:12 PM


I merely registered for the sole purpose of giving tribute to 'Charisma'
I'm honored to have known 'Charisma' for quite a spell now..;-)
and hope TBF forever.
She just now showed me two of her poems she'd posted here.
This one:'Whoohoo.....whoohoo' as well as 'Mother Earth'
I only have this to say to you CHARISMA:...FANTASTIC!
I always knew there was a 'poet' hiding in you..;-)
'poet'(Eng) not 'kentoet'(Bahasa In) ..;-)
The future is yours...
'Reach up to the heavens and pluck the stars from the skies girl!'

P.s. Charisma does this mean you'll stop putting them in my GB? ..;-(

ethome
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16 posted 2000-11-03 05:38 PM


Wonderful images and all round great fun ...enjoyed it very much....ethome
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