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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Fluting winds whisper softly in the breeze can you hear them in the moonlight? dark shadows dance in black chemise Sweet scent of roses linger in the night shadows tango across beach floor eerie winds play tenderly with delight You can see her dance with her paramour her flowing hair upon his shoulder phantom of Raven Beach and his Lenore The darkness peeks and it becomes colder the blanket of the night surounds their souls a raven stalks perched upon a boulder Their love precious as the dead sea scrolls fluting winds serenades before dawn tolls  < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful images, Victoria! Just beautiful! Denise |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Victoria ~~~ I am always in awe of the beauty of your poetry. You paint such wonderful images, and this is no exception! Enjoyed so much!  Follow your dream! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ beautifully done.....  -SEA |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Victoria- this is so beautiful. i love it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Victoria! What beautiful imagery you weave within these lines ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Beautiful piece Victoria, wonderful imagery. This is just hauntingly lovely. Bonnie |
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StarGlow Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 40 |
Victoria, Enchanting! ...and beautiful! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Their love precious as the dead sea scrolls fluting winds serenades before dawn tolls Excellent conclusion, enchanting work, Victoria. Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Denise..thank you..im am glad you enjoyed..thank you for peeking in.. Sunny..That makes me feel good for you to say that Sunny..love the ravens too haa..  Sea..Thank you very much Sea..glad you enjoyed.. Vicky..Thank you..i have only done i think one or two terza rimas before..i guess i was in the mood for trying one again.. Kit..thank you so much..i am glad you enjoyed Kit.. Bonnie..Thank you ..thats how i tried to make it feel..im glad it came out that way haa.. starglow...welcome to passions ..i will have to be on the lookout for your poetry..thank you for reading.. Robert..thank you so much Robert..and for taking time to read today..nice to hear from you ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Victoria, this is lovely, your poetry is beautiful, it's enchanting. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Victoria, are you the incarnation of Poe?? This is at least as good.. "quoth the Raven" Hauntingly beautiful, as always. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Kathleen and Sandra..you are too nice..both of you..appreciate your comments.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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