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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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But soft… the ache begins, wanting, waiting, yearning, learning to love is hard, there is promise in your smile on your swollen lips flushed blushing I bluff and smile a small sad smile hoping you see me the naked soul not the immaculate woman the ice maiden the pedestal image for a night only I pray love me fill me take away my sorrow just once only once touch me. Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Kethry.....after reading this, I hope that all your wishes come true. This is full of yearning, and longing. What a wonderful poem it is!!  Follow your dream! |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
I bluff and smile a small sad smile hoping you see me the naked soul not the immaculate woman the ice maiden the pedestal image WOW. ~ Beth |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey Keth Blown away by this most excellent write...you've done well  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunny1, thanks, it's been so long I don't know if I would recognise my wishes coming true *Laughs* Beth, thank you for the kind wow and the repeat of my words. Tracie66, thanks for stopping by and reading Be well Keth Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Wow Kethry....this is excellent! for a night only I pray love me fill me take away my sorrow just once only once touch me. This part says it all....and so powerfully, excellent work!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Kethry, standing in line to applaud. This is a tender, poignant shadow of a soul's longing. Fantastic! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
BDC, thanks for the comment and the repeat of my words. serenity, thanks for the applause and the assumption of a queue. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ahh, Keth,...such an apt title....what a breath of want. Your work still gets me,...everytime K. *Peace you. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sweet desire, wishes...hope they come true... and hope that he captured your naked soul..  ...superbCharisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Fire, thanks I was a little pensive in this write, so I'm glad it came through. Charisma, what a beautiful name you have. Thanks for the high praise. I don't get many superbs Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kethry I believe people get what they yearn for...just sometimes it isn't exactly the one they yearn for...or the timing is way off...yet sooner or later love is gonna getcha...thats what I believe...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James, its good that you believe that. Thanks for responding. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh K, me too, I am yearning. Wonderful poem here, flows perfectly. Sandra |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
If someone asked for a definition of poignancy I would refer them to this poem. you've expressed it so beautifully. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
I could say more, but it looks like whatever else I would say would be but an echo of everyone else!!!!  clapping |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sandra, thanks for the response *HuGS* Wil, Thanks for dropping by and commenting. Such a nice man you are. Snow, I heard that outstanding, thank you so much. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very nice poem Kethry A pleasure to read... Coco |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Coco, I appreciate you stopping by. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
May I just add my sincere compliments on a piece that is so well written; it makes me yearn too Absolutely beautiful!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is very definitive of it's title and it the rhythm was very beautiful Kethry....great job! Nathan |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Peppermint25, thank you so much, I haven't seen your name here before, where do you post? Nate Dog, always a pleasure to please your constuctive mind. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Kethry, whoever this poem is for is one lucky guy,,,or bloke  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'hoping you see me the naked soul not the immaculate woman the ice maiden the pedestal image' Excellent lines here, kethry!! I love it!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved it! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful writing, Kethry Liz |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
'Deer I didn't write this for anyone, it just needed to be be written. Snowpants thanks for repeating my words and the "excellent" Irish Rose. Glad you liked it, thanks. Liz Thanks for the response. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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