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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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To hold you in my arms again would be a dream come true but until MS goes to heaven I'll savour memories of you but should there be a window through which we could touch you'd feel the love and know that I dream of this so much You'd know the route that I take As I remember the day you were born the love you'd see through my tears a heartache that left me so torn I've spoken of my love for you with kind and special friends and some of them have told me tears will help a heart to mend Last year I took special roses and placed them by the stream yellow white for golden sunshine and shared with you my dream I know one day we'll meet again I'll know you by your smile because my darling daughter you made my life worthwhile As I fed swans by the river so gentle was their touch I thought of all my anger to lose you both is cruel and hurts so very much. Rachel: 29/10/74 - 11/03/98 |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is a lovely tribute to your daughter - I know she's smiling down on you now (and she's got a beautiful smile as you do). Take care, my friend. You are in my thoughts this week, Cindy. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RainbowGirl~This is so lovely and so heartfelt....I am so touched. Thank you for posting this beautiful tribute to your daughter.......tears do have a healing effect.......I just hope you don't have to cry much more.........you are very special.Heart felt HUGS to you. -SEA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Tender, touching and beautifully done, Cindy. HUGS to you on this trying weekend. My prayers are with you. A Letter From Heaven I’m sending hugs and kisses from above To let you know I’m thinking of you still; I’m safely snuggled in His arms of love In Paradise, according to His will. One joyous day you’ll see me once again When time and space no longer separate Me from your side; we’ll be together then A blessing that no one can confiscate. Until that day remember I love you And that I’m smiling down upon your way To give you strength in everything you do To fill your heart with cheer from day to day… And playing with the angels all the while So Mommy dry your tears, give me a smile. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a touching tribute to your daughter Cindy. Very beautiful and so filled with love and memories. You are in my heart and prayers. Best wishes, /Kit |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
A wonderful tribute. 'but should there be a window through which we could touch you'd feel the love and know that I dream of this so much' Thinking of you, Jon |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Cindy, You have already touched through the spiritual window, in all your thoughts, and prayers, your sorrow, your longing, and even when writing this lovely poems. The window is open to your heart and soul. This is so beautifully written. Hugs Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl~ 'but should there be a window through which we could touch' Ah ... there is and you did. 'I know one day we'll meet again I'll know you by your smile' She's there smiling through your tears. *Hugs* of love~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Cindy-- my heart goes out to you. i know how hard it is to lose someone who you love so very much. i can't imagine what it is like losing a child. but i do know what it is like to lose a parent. i am the same age your daughter would be...and six years ago i lost my mom. i know the hurt, the pain, the confusion, and the sadness that goes along with this kind of pain. i am so sorry for your loss! maybe and this thought does make me smile a little...your daughter and my Mom are up in heaven together as friends.  you willbe in my thoughts. take care. amy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but should there be a window through which we could touch you'd feel the love and know that I dream of this so much ================== there is a window sweetie.. the one in your heart that opened up and gave you the words to this beautiful poem... the same window that your feel the sunshine thru.. she is there... and you pay her a wonderful tribute with this special gift... like your tears..your poetry will help to heal your heart. This poem touches me deeply... my daughters name is Rachel also... thank you for sharing your Rachel with us take care sweet poet jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Cindy ... I celebrate Rachel with you today .... My thoughts and prayers are with you ... HUSG |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a sad one indeed...beautifully written.HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The circle of HUGS is never complete without you, Shannon. I'm sure your presence here will be an extra special treat for Cindy, just as it is for me. HUGS Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so beautiful and touching...Cindy...and I wish I didn't understand so well...I cry with you and send you hugs...my thoughts are with you! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
friends gather 'round lifting up smiles from sorrowful frowns their own aching cares travelworn for the lost child that was born friends gather into open arms keeping close loved ones with mutual ache women know best, but men are learning too when grief is shared, it's lessened by these few... you have our hearts, our prayers are with you it's never enough, I know but trust in God's wisdom, it's best and she's there on his side, you know... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
These are gentle and beautiful words you have written for Rachel...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
As the country song goes, "There's holes in the floor of heaven" and you have to know that she is watching you and yes there are windows too and your window is in your heart. This is a beautiful tribute of love to your daughter. She is with the Lord right now and smiling and singing with angels just waiting for that day when the two of you will once again find your way to each others arms. Hugs to you and prayers as well. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh what beautiful words you have written for your sweet angel RG...Hoping that you find comfort knowing that she's gotten her downy wings and is soaring through the heavens, watching over you. Thoughts and prayers to you dear lady. Bonnie |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Bless you, Cindy... |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
HUGS Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
God Bless - This week, and always, Cindy.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your arms may be empty, but this poem pours from a heart full of love... It's beautiful, Little Chick. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Rainbow Girl, The light still shines. . . forever. . . from our hearts. . . You are in our prayers. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Keeping a promise... and you in my prayers. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
My heart goes out to you! Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Bless, thank you - to all of you... Aimster: I hope your mum had a great sense of humour because I think she might need it if Rachel was like me... Suthern: Thanks MotherHen, I knew you would.. HUSG I don't really know what to say to all of you, except Thank you, a big thank you! HUGS |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cindy~ Just seeing that you're here is enough to make my heart happy that you know how much we care. Take care of you ... we love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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