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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Dusty Rainbows Hazy colors blend Reaching inside Past the scars and walls built high A once empty canvas in the middle of a room Awaiting your flesh to press against my dreams O! Fill my life Paint my soul Color me ... With you Rope the stars and Sprinkle their iridescent magic on the floor Then take me in your arms ...and dance Among the rainbows Within the mist Along a dusty trail Leading to a willow weeping ...awaiting the cries of the night ... arching against our horizon Snow ©2000 |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Nice one Snow! Jon  |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Snow... tremendous! Loved how you painted the images on the screen.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The most beautiful rainbow is one that joins one heart and soul to another...beautiful work Snow~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nicely written!!!!!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow....simply awesome write. I just love it when you find two hearts riding a rainbow together. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
A once empty canvas in the middle of a room Awaiting your flesh to press against my dreams Neve, your words, at home in my heart. love this piece... Robert Joseph ~enb~ |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Thank you all so very much. I really enjoyed writing this piece and sharing it with all of you. ~Snow |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Snow~ This is a masterpeice! Beautiful poetry. Deb |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Rope the stars and Sprinkle their iridescent magic on the floor Then take me in your arms ...and dance Beautifully penned poem Snow, wonderfully written. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
The title itself is poetry. The rest is icing on the cake! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Snow,just put on my dancing shoes.It has swept me away. breath taking. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love your words snow..lovely write.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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