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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2000-10-28 12:07 PM


May I Trust You?

I have a heart
I possess words
I want both
to be heard

please believe
do not grieve
when you hold
words that sieve

into your skin
without sin
to be a part
and impart

Trust.



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-28 01:27 PM


Ohh I do like this one! How it ended up on page 3 without anyone reading it is beyond me.   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-10-28 01:36 PM


Kari, what was this doing with no replies, why didn't i see this earlier. (Thanks SEA, for bringing this back, hugs to you) This is wonderful wonderful wonderful, yes more cheers, even from my silent throat. I really love this.
Take care
                Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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3 posted 2000-10-28 01:54 PM


Karilea--

beautiful and breathtaking! loved this very much. your writing is always filled with such peace and tranquility. this one is no exception! take care,

amy  

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4 posted 2000-10-28 05:33 PM


Ah, that sometimes elusive trust....This is beautiful Karilea.... Bonnie
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5 posted 2000-10-28 05:55 PM


A question for all of us my friend. . .

Well done. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2000-10-28 06:02 PM


To give of your heart purely
Rely on the truth of a friend
Understand one another completely by listening
Say what you feel with no worries of being condemned
Take one as they are and love unconditionally


[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-28-2000).]

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7 posted 2000-10-28 06:12 PM


SEA, Marsha, isn't it uniquely wonderful how certain people connect, with the mere read of words...how special you are to me, for always  giving a "lift"...thank you...

Amy...lol...you missed my "dark" days...thank you...

Bonnie, in this, trust should never be elusive, but it should be unconditional and unquestioning...

Sven, you know it should not be a question...it should be an action...thank you...

Mark, take your Acrostic and post it appropriately, as your words are the very heart of trust...thank you...
< !signature-->

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ




[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-28-2000).]

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-10-28 06:23 PM


Beautiful thoughts of trust Karilea ... I like the style you've used in this to complement your message, lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2000-10-28 06:54 PM


Yes, it should be my friend. . . but for so many. . . it is not. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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10 posted 2000-10-28 07:05 PM


Kit, thanks! Sometimes simple says much, yes?...

Sven...then it is up to us to pass it on, is it not?...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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