Open Poetry #10 |
May I Trust You? |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I Trust You? I have a heart I possess words I want both to be heard please believe do not grieve when you hold words that sieve into your skin without sin to be a part and impart Trust. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ohh I do like this one! How it ended up on page 3 without anyone reading it is beyond me. -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, what was this doing with no replies, why didn't i see this earlier. (Thanks SEA, for bringing this back, hugs to you) This is wonderful wonderful wonderful, yes more cheers, even from my silent throat. I really love this. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Karilea-- beautiful and breathtaking! loved this very much. your writing is always filled with such peace and tranquility. this one is no exception! take care, amy |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ah, that sometimes elusive trust....This is beautiful Karilea.... Bonnie |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A question for all of us my friend. . . Well done. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
To give of your heart purely Rely on the truth of a friend Understand one another completely by listening Say what you feel with no worries of being condemned Take one as they are and love unconditionally [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, Marsha, isn't it uniquely wonderful how certain people connect, with the mere read of words...how special you are to me, for always giving a "lift"...thank you... Amy...lol...you missed my "dark" days...thank you... Bonnie, in this, trust should never be elusive, but it should be unconditional and unquestioning... Sven, you know it should not be a question...it should be an action...thank you... Mark, take your Acrostic and post it appropriately, as your words are the very heart of trust...thank you...< !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful thoughts of trust Karilea ... I like the style you've used in this to complement your message, lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes, it should be my friend. . . but for so many. . . it is not. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kit, thanks! Sometimes simple says much, yes?... Sven...then it is up to us to pass it on, is it not?... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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