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An Empty Feeling!
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An Empty Feeling! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Alone No one Pained Drained Seeking a hand None to lend Heart beating Still seeking Softness Of a caress Hurting Holding Why? The tears So many years Wounds Deep sounds Love me Hold me. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ I'm right here sweetie......  this is so sad.....-SEA |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
The sadness here is so overwhelming but so beautifully written. Wonderful poem. Juls |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This is very sad but also a beautiful plea...Great writting!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
(((HUGS))), a hug always helps. Now cheer up. Marcy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel...I reach my hand to you my friend...all you have to do is take it |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Like the succinctness of this. Corinne |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow...this speaks volumes. If you need a hug, you've landed in the right forum! We have World Champion huggers here! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
To SEA, Juliet, Beth, Alle'cram,Paula, Corinne and Poetdevine, Thank you all for the comments. I am very down at the moment and need heaps of support. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
HUGS from me too JD.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ *Hugs* and more *Hugs* And how about a smile or two ?  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
sometimes a reply can work? this was so heartfelt, nothing we ever write is in vain. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Daniel ***((((warm hug)))***..see I am here and hold you tight... you penned this with such a sadness..... come on....baby ..chin up. Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Daniel* As you can see from the replies you have many friends offering support if you reach for it...that's what this place is about...friendship and healing~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
To Victoria, IrishRose, Marge, Charisma, and Butterflies, I thank you all so much for your support, I need it so much at the moment. Loneliness is a very painful thing. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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