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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dubious Thoughts fall away like the red shift And coffee vapors mist and drift. Seducing in upon a head That lays a pillow acting dead. Hell is in the getting up Heaven's in the coffee cup And metronomes tick away To tick and stroke the cope of day. I'll wear my Rumpelstilkin mask And face the ugly work day task. I'll add my ounce of hired fuel To make the masses buy and drool. The day will wear and I will swear For never will they clear the air Subliminal will eat away Insidious will win the day. And Charlie Chaplin will asleep Another day will be complete. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just another day in the life.. Not always so great, hm? But at least you can write at your own will. Sandra |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...even if this day is ouch and you are laying on the couch I'm glad you found some poetry and how you feel is what I see Great poem! |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Going through the motions...nicely done. Thank god for that cuppa Joe. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
somehow, Sir, I always get this feeling of you smiling at all of us working folk...talking about the "day" at night... but do know, you made me grin the whole way through!!! {~,^} I also appreciate the "mask" which is ready for Hallowe'en...< !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, some days are like that! Great expression, Seymour! I love it! Denise |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
a man of your talent should have a higher opinion of himself  - A great write sir! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey you...  me thinks ya need to trade in your java for some of me raspberry tea ... it seems to have some "strange" powers LOL and there is nada thing tedious, or routine about your poetry ... but i do so relate.. to feeling dubious some days...(most days) and as for the gift of caffeine.. nectar of the gods me thinks...  some days me needs it in an I.V. *winkie winkie* later way cool cup-ajoe-gator me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, All dug up from the past. Thank you. Martie, You are a refreshing breeze. *L* Ron, Thank you and have a cup on me. Karilea, You are so observant. *L* Dsnyder, Thank you for the great. Wilfred, Thank you for the read and nice comment. JM, The nector of your words are sweet. And they are to me a treat. You hang my sky a JM star and I often wonder where you are. Winkiewinkie. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy, Another excellent telling of the work-a-day world .Don't know if i've ever actually "Chaplined" myself to sleep , but I have been known to "Marceau" a bit. Great read. Doc |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Chaplin "said" a lot with a little And so do you. I happen to agree with Wilfred 100% and I'd like to see DR. Moose's Marceau in action. Incidentally, great poem Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr Moose1, Enjoyed the comment, thnak you. Elizabeth, Nice to see you commenting again. Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Quote: JM, "The nector of your words are sweet. And they are to me a treat. You hang my sky a JM star and I often wonder where you are. Winkiewinkie." ====================== Well Im right here baby LOL Stopping in for a little while ... to ring your chimes and make ya smile Im still here where I've always been reading your poetry...cause your under me skin and though for now... I must come and go my eyes still read your every word ..this you know Look for me in between your lines ... youll find me there ... embracing your rhymes. *winkiewinkie* later-sweet SY-gator love ya me [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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