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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-10-27 08:06 PM



Circle The Wagons
~*Marge Tindal*~

They're coming from the left
Coming from the right
Circle the wagons friends
We'll write with all our might

Load the sonnets sisters
Fire the ballads long
There's passion in these hills
Let's fill them now with song

Each and every poet
Joined with poetess
Let us all just do
What we all do best

Let's write into battle
Quill poised high in sight
Pen the perfect poem
To fling into this night

A poetic dream come true
They're coming from all around
The Muses - The Muses - The Muses
We're Passions In Poetry bound !





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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1 posted 2000-10-27 08:16 PM



Marge-
   LOL...you've got the fire tonight,
   my friend!!    I love this!!!  
  
   "A poetic dream come true
    They're coming from all around
    The Muses - The Muses - The Muses
    We're passions in poetry bound!"

    pen poised and ready for to fight
    this poetic battle, my friend!!  

    thanks for the smile this evening.  

    love ya,
    -vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-10-27 08:20 PM





Words of love in rhyme
verse of heart shall be
these get me everytime
these are the ones for me  




Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2000-10-27 08:20 PM


Evening Marge,

You certainly lit up Passions with this great writing. My, you write well, and I enjoyed this.

Bill

Martie
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4 posted 2000-10-27 08:33 PM


Marge--

Poems to the right
Poems to the left
CHARGE!!

gotta love you and your circle of poems....my quills at the ready!

Denise
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5 posted 2000-10-27 09:08 PM


...I think my Muse skipped out on me, may I borrow yours for just a bit?  

Denise

Toddles
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6 posted 2000-10-27 09:23 PM


Fun Form & Flowing... Fancy Free Fashion!

Of forget my lame attempt at being cute...

I Loved It!!!


"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind!"...Dr. Seuss

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-10-27 09:25 PM


Vicky~
Well, I gotta thank MarkB~ for the inspiration.
And he doesn't even know it yet !  

Hi 'Tweetie,MarkB~
You can just guess where this one came from, can't you ?
  Love ya'~

Bill~
Thank you, Bill, for stopping by my place.
I hope you will return and I appreciate the comments.

Martie~
Gotta LOVE a ready quill !
Go girl !  

Denise~
Look to the left
Look to the right
Muses circling all around
Get one in your sight !

I just happen to have a loaner -
I'm sending Poppie, my muse of laughter !
Now open the window and let him/her in !
Start laughing and writing ... he/she is a hoot !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-10-27 11:28 PM


Owl sits on my left
white feather on my right, yes
poems shall flow long

{~,~}
< !signature-->

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ




[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-27-2000).]
Denise
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9 posted 2000-10-27 11:31 PM


hehehe.....is that 'looner' or 'loaner'....
Thanks, Marge! I'll see what we can come up with!! I'll give her back as soon as I am finished.....I promise!  

Denise

Wilfred Yeats
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10 posted 2000-10-27 11:37 PM


"half a league half a league Half a league onward
not though the soldier knew someone had blundered"
Ok - I'm onward and upward - how can I refuse such a poetic request ?  

Romy
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11 posted 2000-10-28 12:04 PM


Wait! I'm running to catch up! Can I get on the wagon too! Don't leave me behind!
tracie66
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12 posted 2000-10-28 01:14 AM


Marge~
WOW!!! fantastic images, this is just so wonderful to read a delight in fact  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
13 posted 2000-10-28 01:31 AM


oh my friend, I do know and I thank you.  So did I manage the circle properly...lol...you need not answer that one my sweet friend...just had to come back and tell you that I love ya.  That is still under license isn't it?  Yeah, I do believe so.  
Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2000-10-28 02:50 PM


Toddles~
You just toddled in when I wasn't looking !  Thanks.

Karilea~
Yep ... and we will write with all our might.

Denise~
LOL !   A LOANER ... or could be a LOONEY tune.  
Just write !

Wilfred~
Write on !

Debbie~
Are you running around in circles ?
LOL !

Tracie~
Jump on the bandwagon of delight
Write - write - write !

MarkB~
YES, Wagon Master !
I LOVE YOU TOO !
And your poetic license hasn't expired !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Paula Finn
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15 posted 2000-10-29 01:16 AM


Marge...hhhhhmmmmmm...now where did I leave the directions for loading this here pen? HERE there are...insert tip...pull lever...ssssllllluurrrrrrrppppppppp...there...now I am armed and ready
Kethry
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16 posted 2000-10-29 01:14 AM


Captain! My captain! I'll seize the day
write those poems 'fore my muse runs away.
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2000-10-29 04:16 PM


Paula~
Alright !
Attaway to go girl !

Kethry~
You got it !
Wrestle that muse to the ground and write, write, write !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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18 posted 2000-10-30 02:55 PM


The Muses are coming? Sounds good to me! *grabs her paper and pen* Ready and rarin' to go!

Good work Marge!

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



Corinne
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19 posted 2000-10-30 03:26 PM


Great poem, Marge!  Love the title, and the message!

Corinne

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2000-11-01 07:05 PM


Elizabeth~
I'd say that we surely captured those muses
in the Halloween hustle !
Man !  What a bunch of great poems !
There is just talent galore here ... I love it.

Corinne~
Thanks, gal.
I always appreciate your take on what I pen.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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21 posted 2000-11-02 02:58 AM


almost missed this one, glad that I came in to read.  
cause this another jewel of a poem from your hand.

((hugs))

Charisma

Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2000-11-02 03:01 AM


Charisma~
I'm always glad when you come in to read.
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Rest you merry upon this day.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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