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Like I Need You
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Like I Need You Like a bee needs a flower Like a bird needs the sky Like the earth needs the shower I need you, I softly sigh Like the music needs a song Like the fire needs a flame Like the ding needs the dong I need you just the same Like the wind needs to blow Like the sun needs to shine Like the theatre needs the show I need you come rain or fine Like the sea needs the wave Like the river needs the bend Like the bear needs the cave I need you your love to send Like the rain needs the drops Like the beach needs the sand Like the cricket needs the hops I need you close at hand Like the moon needs the light Like the stars need the glow Like the day needs the night I need you for my soul Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ this is beautiful  -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Like this one alot, especially...Like the ding needs the dong and like the cricket needs the hops...like these the most. very nice and musical. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I am sure this will be with me all day... very lyrical quality to it Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, don't you think it's just a little mushy, no love only kidding! Well you know what love is kid  Thanks love really appreciate you stopping by, Take care Marsha Ron, thank you, glad you liked it, truly, and you have some wonderful work of your own, which I really enjoy.  Jamie, Lyrical, are you sure? Really I thank you most sincerely. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful penned, like it.... yes even "like the ding needs the dong" j/k....I like the whole poem....and mmm....it remains me that I might need something too either.  Charisma |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ I only meant mushy fluffy heart....full of lovely words......nothing bad.......I love your poetry. -SEA |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Like a song it needs a beat! Put it to music girl, it's beautiful! Much love all, Krissie ~*Those words... Oh, how I long to hear ...those words Tell me...*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Charisma, thank you, seems that the mysterious where from which these little scribbles come has a hit. I almost hate to admit it, but these poems and this is another one, haven't really taken any real time at all. So I thank you although I know I don't deserve it. SEA, love, now don't you know me by now? You know I was teasing, as I know you were. Apart from anything else kid I love mushy, after all isn't that what happens when a mellow Marsha melts!! And girl you know I love your work, you do don't you? I thought so but it always wise to check at source! Take care kid, be good, but not too good!!! Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ It has a cute lilt to it. When they flow so easily - there's usually a reason - Easy to see that this is a happy heart waiting for a place to happen ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Hi Marsha, If you have such a love for someone I'm envious! Lovely read, and very romantic Jon |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lovely heartfelt openness in this piece of yours. I also like the ding and the dong...sort of reminds me of me sometimes LOL...and what would a beach be without sand...you have penned a beauty. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marsha- this is beautiful...so happy it just seems to skip along. really enjoyed this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, I thank you, I don't deserve praise, but I still thank you. A very happy heart, which has found it's place to happen. I thank you for your grace, and charm, and I thank you for just being always ready to lift a spirit when it's down. Not obviously that my spirit is tired or down, but when I was, you were. Thank you is too simple a phrase, but it's true nevertheless. Jon, I thank you too, yes I have a love that is rather special, so the praise should really go to him. There will be someone special for you, I'm sure, and I'll keep my fingers crossed for you. Mark my friend, Surely not Cowboy, a ding or a dong? I'm glad you like this, you are as usual far too kind to me. This is another of those poems that I scribble between doing one thing and then another. Actually I should be working but that's neither here nor there, I could call it dead time, but it's not really an appropriate phrase in a hospital. Anyway I thank you, for lots of things, but mainly because you are a genuine nice guy. For always being willing to share your beautiful poetry with us all. For having a sense of humour and because you seem to always find time to read everyone else's poems, and make pleasant comments on them. And I am proud to call you friend Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Vicky, I'm sorry I think you must have squeezed in while I was replying. I am actually very tired tonight, but I do want to thank you, for your reading and responding. And I'm pleased you like it. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wonderfully written, Marsha! It flowed very nicely! Great poem!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
sp, thank you, I appreciate you reading and replying. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Like the moon needs the light Like the stars need the glow Like the day needs the night I need you for my soul ================== yes....know this need well ... love this poems cadence.. a song for sure... someone inspired a sweet harmony in this tune excellent Marsha.. and that last verse is beautiful in its imagery and its poetic need. take care jm |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marsha-- beautiful poem! this had a lot of wonderful imagery and made me smile. glad to see someone makes you feel like this. take care. amy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
JM, thank you oh so much, in fact that last verse is my favourite to, I think it's because night, holds a very special place for me and my man. I do thank you, I know I don't deserve it, wherever these little gems comes from, they are a gift, and as such I offer them to you all here. Take care Amy, thank you very much love, you know how I adore your poems, so I'm deeply touched that you should enjoy my scribbles. I'm happy it made you smile, too, it's nice to be happy, makes the world a friendlier place. Take care little one Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Yes dear Mushy heart, I know, I just wanted to clairify my point of view on it....you are sweet!  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, I know Mushy and fluffy, Oh my there goes my reputation, (What reputaion, I know just don't let the rest of the MBOOPAS know, because I'll never keep them in order now!)Take care kid, you're one of the good ones Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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