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Invited Love |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Invited Love eyes invited, reach for hand soul enlighten sweet love commend spread our wings with anticipation my heart that sings sweet sensation in heavenly flight passions surround sensual sigh when love is found flying high nothing compare this cherish height enchanting care just you and me confluence in this wide sea yes you and me sharing caring wearing love. Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ this flows so nice, I love the feelings that come from reading...  -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Such an enchanting ride you've taken me. Ron |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh wow. Ron is right, this is quiet a ride. I loved it from start to finish. Juls |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you ~SEA~....~RON~...and ~Juls~....I am glad that you love the ride.... Love is so easy, when its near |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It did feel like flowing along on a river with one sweet swelling wave after another; not bouncing you along, but gently moving you from place to place How lovely your words!!!Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
peppermint, thank you for your kind words, and yes I feel it that way too......flowing gently with that wave.... Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely, and so peaceful, yet passionate. Great combination. Thanks for your words on my poem, also. Sandra |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
confluence in this wide sea yes you and me Charisma, a romantic delight...great read! Thanks for sharing! Robert Joseph |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Charisma, when I read this, I too, felt as if I were flowing on a gentle wave. I would love to surf it.  Love is the law, love under will. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yes...and what a sweet ride it is |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Cat: your welcome, its always a pleasure to read poems from others...wish that I had more time to reply....thank you for taking time to reply this one....glad that you liked it Robert J:its indeed a romantic delight, and I loved to share this with you. ooops....I ment the poem.....*lol* jlocke: surfing on this wave...oh honey I think that you never will stop with surfing..... Paula: Im happy that you like the ride too |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Count me in, Charisma! I'm ready for a good flight! a very nice style in this one |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Charisma, love this I absolutely love this, sounds of loud clapping and cheers! This is so well written I love the flow, absolutely beautiful. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Balladeer: next wave is yours....close your eyes....and lets goooooooo..... enjoy your flight hon. Marsha: thank you for your kind words, I am glad that you like the flow too.... |
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