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Charisma
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0 posted 2000-10-26 10:59 AM


Invited Love

eyes invited,
reach for hand
soul enlighten
sweet love commend
spread our wings
with anticipation
my heart that sings
sweet sensation
in heavenly flight
passions surround
sensual sigh
when love is found
flying high
nothing compare
this cherish height
enchanting care
just you and me
confluence
in this wide sea
yes you and me
sharing
caring
wearing
love.

Charisma



[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 10-27-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-26 11:02 AM


Charisma~ this flows so nice, I love the feelings that come from reading... -SEA
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2 posted 2000-10-26 11:03 AM


Such an enchanting ride you've taken me. Ron
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3 posted 2000-10-26 11:09 AM


Oh wow. Ron is right, this is quiet a ride. I loved it from start to finish.
Juls

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4 posted 2000-10-26 02:55 PM


Thank you ~SEA~....~RON~...and ~Juls~....I am glad that you love the ride....
Love is so easy, when its near  

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5 posted 2000-10-26 07:48 PM


It did feel like flowing along on a river with one sweet swelling wave after another; not bouncing you along, but gently moving you from place to place   How lovely your words!!!

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6 posted 2000-10-27 03:57 AM


peppermint, thank you for your kind words, and yes I feel it that way too......flowing gently with that wave....

Charisma

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7 posted 2000-10-27 12:02 PM


Very lovely, and so peaceful, yet passionate. Great combination.
Thanks for your words on my poem, also.
Sandra

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8 posted 2000-10-27 12:07 PM


confluence
in this wide sea
yes you and me

Charisma, a romantic delight...great read!
Thanks for sharing!

Robert Joseph

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9 posted 2000-10-27 01:49 PM


Charisma, when I read this, I too, felt as if I were flowing on a gentle wave.
I would love to surf it.

Love is the law, love under will.

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10 posted 2000-10-27 02:31 PM


Oh yes...and what a sweet ride it is
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11 posted 2000-10-27 05:50 PM


Cat: your welcome, its always a pleasure to read poems from others...wish that I had more time to reply....thank you for taking time to reply this one....glad that you liked it  

Robert J:its indeed a romantic delight, and I loved to share this with you.  
ooops....I ment the poem.....*lol*

jlocke: surfing on this wave...oh honey I think that you never will stop with surfing.....

Paula: Im happy that you like the ride too  


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12 posted 2000-10-27 05:59 PM


Count me in, Charisma! I'm ready for a good flight!

a very nice style in this one  

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13 posted 2000-10-27 06:04 PM


Charisma, love this I absolutely love this, sounds of loud clapping and cheers! This is so well written I love the flow, absolutely beautiful.
Take care
                 Marsha
                          


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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14 posted 2000-10-28 03:19 PM


Balladeer: next wave is yours....close your eyes....and lets goooooooo.....
enjoy your flight hon.

Marsha: thank you for your kind words, I am glad that you like the flow too....

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