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A Poet's Pondering
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A Poet’s Pondering Ink of pen speaks for scarlet lips Desire recorded on perfume paper Written words are smiles to heart Sorrow drinks of our blood no more So says the poet’s pen Flight of fantasy dreams you in Fuel body my sensual amorist Lust electrifies consuming me As two half souls clinch to one Such is the poet’s pillow Shall I daydream flowers of winter Reflect mysteries of universe Or ask of Heaven what it sees Powers of intellect focus on you For you, are all this poet ponders Marina Oct 27 2000 It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is so lovely so sensual...great write |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
such a beautiful thought, written on butterfly's wings, drifting softly through my mind. nice. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is absolutely beautiful Marina...one of your finest I think. Glad to see your work again! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love this wonderful describtion that you have expressed so well.... poets pondering...lets that keep you writing. well done.  Charisma |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Pondering with pillowed head is when most of my light is shed.. nicely done Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Very nicely writ Marina. A good message. James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
What all poets should ponder. . . happy that you can. . . Excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Paula, thank so very much. Glad you enjoyed it. Ron, thank you. Hope you are enjoying your new home here!! Holly, my friend , thank you very much. I am glad to see you still posting also! Charisma, thank you. A poet's pondering is indeed what keeps us writing. Jamie, thank you. Nice to see you again! James, thank you. Sven. thank you. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I don't remember who said it or where I read it, but I read once htat a true poet bleeds ink. I loved this! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Flight of fantasy dreams you in Fuel body my sensual amorist Lust electrifies consuming me As two half souls clinch to one Such is the poet’s pillow Shall I daydream flowers of winter Reflect mysteries of universe Or ask of Heaven what it sees Powers of intellect focus on you For you, are all this poet ponders ================== oooooog girl this poem is awesome.. ya know I dig it when ya go deep and add a touch of subtle sensuality ... AWESOME write Marina... my my my..your SOOOOOOO well inspired these days .. must be something blowing in the wind  later-perfect poetic pondering gator me OHHH ..PS... forgot to mention... LOVE THAT LAST LINE....UH HUH!!!! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Shall I daydream flowers of winter Reflect mysteries of universe Or ask of Heaven what it sees Powers of intellect focus on you For you, are all this poet ponders and continue to ponder these beautiful thoughts wonderful poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh my friend, how did I miss this one? This is so awesome and I agree with some of the others in that last line says so much. Hard to not let the pen touch what consumes us. Wonderful creation my dear friend. Big hugs to you. |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
I really liked this one Marina. I've been going through your other work in the Archives. I can tell that you've been through a lot. So glad that you have something wonderful to ponder. passion is life. . . |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Kathleen, perhaps that is true. Thank you... Jan, you wouldn't believe the wind is blowing these days!!!  Thanks girl for popping in and uh....knew YOU'D love that last line! Brian, thank you. Glad to see you again! Mark, my friend, thank you so much. Tis true...our pen tells all. PV. Thank you for your post. It is a great compliment to any poet to know that one a fellow poet takes time to search through one's archives. A great compliment indeed. Thank you again. It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Marina, a lovely poem with lovely thoughts...may you always have such to ponder and give us fuel to ponder too Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Peppermint, thank you. May we have have such thoughts. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The poet's pen, the poet's pillow and the poet's pondering....wonderful ponders..very easy flowing with smooth words and lines ....great read!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this poem is fantastic.. *ink of pen speaks with scarlett lips* i love that line..very much enjoyed ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"For you, are all this poet ponders." Amazing how the thoughts in our minds are spilled out onto the paper...some sad, some passionate, some loving, some caring, some dreamy, some intense, and some very revealing. James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Ethome, thank you, my friend. This poet does her share of pondering. Victoria, thank you. That line is my favourite too! James, my friend. Thank you so much. You know how much I truly enjoy your comments. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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