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Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

0 posted 2000-10-26 10:20 PM

Softly, softly

                                                     Gently…
                                                          You pushed past my walls
                                                          And saw me for who I am

                                                     Tenderly…
                                                          You drank from my lips
                                                           The sweetest kiss

                                                     Silently…
                                                          You crept into the night
                                                          To love me from afar

                                                     Softly…
                                                               Softly
                                                               I weep

[This message has been edited by Tara Simms (edited 10-26-2000).]

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-10-26 10:23 PM

Short, but it says a lot. I'm sorry to hear about your pain, Tara.

Hope you're smiling soon.

Elizabeth

You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2000-10-26 10:27 PM

Enjoyed Tara...always enjoy your writing..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2000-10-26 10:33 PM

Exactly..Perfectly said
Sandra

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

4 posted 2000-10-26 10:43 PM

your insight is unsurpassed.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

5 posted 2000-10-26 10:57 PM

Very beautiful Tara. I like this very very much.
Rich

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

6 posted 2000-10-27 02:26 AM

So soft and yes, short....but it spoke reams and reams!!! Hugs

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2000-10-27 04:20 AM

sometimes you don't need much words to say it all....well done

Charisma

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2000-10-27 06:08 AM

Excellent writing...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2000-10-27 06:46 AM

Tara~
Just lovely !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

10 posted 2000-10-27 08:26 AM

Thank you all for reading this.

Take me as I am or watch me as I go

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2000-10-27 12:31 PM

Tara,
there really are no words. . .

From your heart my friend. . .

------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

12 posted 2000-10-27 12:39 PM

Tara, soft and haunting, charming format as well.

Robert Joseph

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

13 posted 2000-10-27 05:36 PM

Sven, unfortunately, too many hearts know this pain.

Robert Joseph, thank you for taking the time to respond to my poetry.

Take me as I am or watch me as I go

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