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Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
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0 posted 2000-10-26 08:52 PM


I lost my love just last night,
Two eyes that met, locked in sight.
Her parted lips beckoned me,
With desires read, so easily.
Her batting eyelashes, caused my eyebrow to raise,
Anticipation of the game of love we’ll play.
My heart was trembling, that she knew,
As our mirrored smiles slowly grew.
Yes, I lost my love just last night,
Within my reach, within my sight
Then without a moments notice, in a hurried way,
Our passing trains, pulled away.


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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-10-26 08:54 PM


Perfect depiction of this scene. I can see the two pass by, just missing eachother, never to be seen again..
Sandra

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