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peppermint35
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0 posted 2000-10-26 08:21 PM


Your hair is as black silk which cascades down
Curtaining us off in our own safe place
Keeping out the world, affording privacy
I cannot keep my hands from it.
As I gaze into your eyes, golden depths dancing with stars
The whole universe shines through them to me
I am lost in your eyes as they wordlessly convey
Your love and passion.
From your eyes, I am drawn as a moth to flame
Your glorious mouth full of promise
Lips full and moistened, they present
An invitation I soon accept
In eagerness now we seek to find our yearnings
Pulses racing, we soar higher and higher
Until we plummet back to earth
As satiated, we finish our dance of love


Peppermint
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1 posted 2000-10-26 08:24 PM


P35~ Ohhhhh...this is SO my kind of dance  ......loved this.   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-10-26 08:48 PM


Wow, I remember those days..Vaguely..
This is perfect.  You seem very much in love. I hope it lasts forever.
Sandra

peppermint35
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3 posted 2000-10-26 08:59 PM


Thanks SEA, this is the best kind of dancing I can do....otherwise I have two left feet  laughs

Oh, surely not that long!!!  Thank you Sandra...yes, very much in love and hoping it will last forever and ever...right now just living each precious moment as it comes!!!

Peppermint
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4 posted 2000-10-27 01:30 AM


Another great write, peppermint!  Very sensual!  I like it a lot!!

sp  


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

peppermint35
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5 posted 2000-10-27 02:15 AM


Thank you SP...I think sensual is the way I was feeling....most definitely!!!!  

Peppermint
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6 posted 2000-10-27 11:48 PM


Wow great poem,I liked it alot. I liked the visuals it created, especially the curtain of hair. Well done.

Angela

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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7 posted 2000-10-27 11:48 PM


Wow great poem,I liked it alot. I liked the visuals it created, especially the curtain of hair. Well done.

Angela


"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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