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Dance of Love
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Dance of Love |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Your hair is as black silk which cascades down Curtaining us off in our own safe place Keeping out the world, affording privacy I cannot keep my hands from it. As I gaze into your eyes, golden depths dancing with stars The whole universe shines through them to me I am lost in your eyes as they wordlessly convey Your love and passion. From your eyes, I am drawn as a moth to flame Your glorious mouth full of promise Lips full and moistened, they present An invitation I soon accept In eagerness now we seek to find our yearnings Pulses racing, we soar higher and higher Until we plummet back to earth As satiated, we finish our dance of love Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
P35~ Ohhhhh...this is SO my kind of dance  ......loved this.  -SEA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, I remember those days..Vaguely.. This is perfect. You seem very much in love. I hope it lasts forever. Sandra |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thanks SEA, this is the best kind of dancing I can do....otherwise I have two left feet  laughs Oh, surely not that long!!! Thank you Sandra...yes, very much in love and hoping it will last forever and ever...right now just living each precious moment as it comes!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Another great write, peppermint! Very sensual! I like it a lot!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you SP...I think sensual is the way I was feeling....most definitely!!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Wow great poem,I liked it alot. I liked the visuals it created, especially the curtain of hair. Well done. Angela "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Wow great poem,I liked it alot. I liked the visuals it created, especially the curtain of hair. Well done. Angela "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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