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Because Our Love Was True--Repost
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Because Our Love Was True--Repost |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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This is a repost from DP #2. Thank you. Because our love was true I thought it would never end I thought I'd always be with you And never have a broken heart to mend Ours was a love pure and right That burned like a flame Guiding my days and brightening my nights My life would never be the same But now my broken heart won't mend You took your flame from my view I thought it would never end Because our love was true --------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is emotional and sad, I feel your pain Sven and I hope that you find a true love that will last a lifetime. Nathan |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It transcends dark into melancholy...but it still weaves that spell... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Love really doesn't ever end; it just changes to something else sometimes... This is very well written...I sure know the feelings. Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Nathan, thank you for reading. . . this one is for everyone who is hurting right now. . . Sunshine, thank you my friend. . .  . . . light out of the darkness. . .peppermint, yes it does, but into what? Thank you for reading. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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