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Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

0 posted 2000-10-26 12:28 PM

Whisper me a dream
Soft
Clouds
Wandering
Aimlessly
Whisper me a song
Doves
Cooing
Angelic
Sighs
Whisper me a Love
Roses
Unfurling
Delicate
Prize
Whisper me a dream

[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-27-2000).]

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-10-26 01:11 PM

I'll whisper to you
Of soft feather beds
Of roses in moonlight
And rain on the roof

I'll whisper the dream
Of holding you tight
As the sun comes up
And the new day dawns

I'll whisper this love
Thats growing here
Fresh and bright
Just for you

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-10-26 01:14 PM

Sorry, didn't mean to interupt this whisper...

Wonderful write, as I have found yours to be. (tiptoeing out quietly)

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-26 01:17 PM

wow, never expected a response so nice. thank you Paula.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2000-10-26 01:18 PM

We can peek in on them Mark.haa..i hope they dont see us..stop it Mark ..i said stop it.haa..GET OUT OF HERE..

btw loved it Ron..

..STOP IT MARK..

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 2000-10-26 01:20 PM

Ron, this piece is very soft, gentle and well-written...a brilliant piece!

Nathan

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

6 posted 2000-10-26 01:20 PM

Thanks Mark, for the comment, lol I'll get a shout from my wife in a sec! (jealous little devil, she is) Ron

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

7 posted 2000-10-26 01:22 PM

thank you Victoria, thank you nate. you guys trying to get me in trouble lol

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2000-10-26 08:32 PM

Ron, this is peaceful and loving. But I caught that little bit on "delicate lies", which can ruin even the sweetest whisper.
Great poem, love your writing.
Sandra

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

9 posted 2000-10-26 09:02 PM

love isn't always perfect, sometimes we'll tell the one we love delicate lies to please them. You'll sometimes do anything for the one you love

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2000-10-26 09:32 PM

Ron, your whispers are of beautiful words. This was sweet. Well done.

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

11 posted 2000-10-26 10:38 PM

Ron, beautiful write, but don't mar your love with dishonesty. The pain it inevitably brings can tear one apart.

Take me as I am or watch me as I go

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

12 posted 2000-10-26 10:47 PM

Ron this is great. It unfolds like a lullabye.
Enjoyed Much,
Rich

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

13 posted 2000-10-27 02:29 AM

You whisper dreams with the best of them Ron

I do agree...even white lies sometimes cause pain on down the line...

My motto is total honesty (I've even been told brutal honesty

laughs

)

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

14 posted 2000-10-27 05:25 AM

whisper softly in your ear,
wishing that you can hear,
this delicate hum in your dream,
sweet roses is what it mean,
then clouds of love will coming trough,
in this softly sweet dream of you.

And Mark, you've been heard...not quiet enough.....LOL....Victoria didn't whisper..*LOL*

Charisma

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

15 posted 2000-10-27 08:50 AM

Thank you everyone....ok
maybe
Roses
Unfurling
Delicate
Lies
should be

Roses
Unfurling
Delicate
Prize

Does that work better?

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

16 posted 2000-10-27 08:53 AM

how does the song go, "tell me a lie"! whisper anytime...good 'en!

Marcy

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

17 posted 2000-10-27 08:57 AM

Ron~ You have a very special way with words. Beautiful poem.
Deb

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

18 posted 2000-10-27 10:13 AM

It works well!!! You deserve the prize, Ron

You do have a wonderful way with words

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

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