Open Poetry #10 |
Boo...scared, I am |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Witches and goblins < !signature-->All around Cram the streets Of my small town Some look evil Others scary Many have warts Some all hairy There's werewolves, warlocks and pumpkins galore Knock, knock knocking At my front door I'll sooth the souls of all these beasts With sugar candy and yummy treats They fill their baskets To the brim Soon angry faces turn to grins Halloweens the time of year When kids dress up in scary gear They then set off to trick n treat In my small town in my small street My attempt at a halloween poem, we don't generally celebrate halloween in Australia so I hope I have captured what it is like Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ You did a fantastic job!!!! Enjoyed! -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful my friend. . . Great job!!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie, this is great, a really good and cute poem. We celebrate halloween in England now but, it's not a big thing here. Still I love your poem Tracie, it's really good. OOoohhh! Booo! Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL you got it girl...this is so cute thanks for the smile |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
a perfect halloween poem...I'll send all the kids from the neighborhood down under. Ron |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Tracie66, Wonderful Halloweeny poem. Enjoyed reading it. Bill |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
You've done a wonderful job on this Tracy...on a side note I wanna express how proud of I am of how your country hosted the summer Olympics...y'll did excellent and I wish that I was living there because I've heard that you Austrailians are very nice. Nathan |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
...BOO, I am scared too I love it.....oh I think that I have the halloween virus too.... .. Charisma |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
SEA~ Glad you enjoyed, I enjoyed your graphic Tracie~ Sven~ HI You like..that is great Tracie~ Hey Marsha thanks for a such a great reply glad you liked Tracie~ Paula~ WOW!!! thanks I'm always pleased to put a smile on your face Tracie~ Hey Ron I'm pleased you like but hey I don't know bout all those kids Tracie~ Hi Bill~ You enjoyed...Great Tracie~ Hello Nate~ Thanks for such a lovely reply and your comments about us Aussie...WOW!! well I like to think we are all friendly Tracie~ ....LOL Charisma what a perfect graphic..thanks for your great reply Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ You captured the spirit so well. The little kids in their costumes are so cute and the night of delight is such fun for them. You are a sweetheart to do such a delightful poem for us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Tracie~ It's perfect! Deb |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
tracie - A perfect description in a delightful poem. I loved how you tied the "my small town" line in at the beginning and end. Nice write. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ It was such fun, really enjoyed writing it and it just seemed to just flow from me so easily...thanks Tracie~ BR~ Thanks hon very much Tracie~ PS~ Great reply, I appreciate you taking a peek...thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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