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The River Me. |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
Quietly, with gentle motion, I begin to flow, soothing the frozen ground around me, I cut a shallow path into the earth, flow to you, flow for you, I bleed to your feet. Softly, with pure devotion, I melt the ice around you, turning cold rejection to water, I remove the glittering white, replace it with liquid care, for you Im there, I take the hard guardian away. Gently, with raw emotion, I pour myself over you, smoothing rough edge stone, soothing pain to the bone, I cover you in me, flowing free, I drown you in my love, and together, we are swept away. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a soft...wow... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Fool~ this made me feel SO warm.......this is wonderful!!  -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is one of the most beautiful poems I've read in awhile. Enjoyed this one very much. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Fool you ain't. this is a very beautifully written poem. Ron |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fool~ What a powerfully moving poem. 'I cover you in me, flowing free' What a gorgeous thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Brilliant....Absolutely brilliant..I loved this!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
Sunshine~ *gentle smile*,thankyou for the wow  .Sea~ Glad you enjoyed it sea. Irish Rose ~ That is a very big compliment,thank you very much. Ron~ thanks Ron,mind you,I am a much bigger fool than you might imagine lol. Marge ~ You say the nicest things Marge *kiss* Beth~ Thankyou so much Beth |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh Fool, Nectar to the bee, for me.BTTT Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
nope your no fool, thats for sure...this was breathtakingly beautiful. your words "poured" over my soul and made me smile. thank you. beautiful write. take care. amy |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
somebody throw water on me, WoW!! Agreeing with Ron, 'fool you aint'. Great poem. Marcy |
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