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I Fish From the Moon
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I Fish From the Moon |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Today of all days I let Ra do the rowing Now I'm cast on the shore The moon's quarter showing So the jukebox will play on With fish pole and crayon I’ll fall from the moon While whistling a tune Crayons I eat, just supply snacks Fish in the lake help me relax I muse that I am A realistic guy Or the king of Siam Or the apple of I Wild are the sevens In the deck of the few And look did you see The borders are blue Your hand is so wan I don’t wanna be you With cap I catch the angel tears Wondering if the spirit's hear I used all my silver To paint the matte black The white-wall radials remain Of my g-ride you may ask I point to the heavens Wearing my “I told you” mask I’d love to hold you I’d love to be the fender That wakes you up Flying through The stratosphere You shed an angel tear I see myself far from view Tipping my cap to you [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You always make me think...a dangerous thing at the best of times LOL |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
paula you're the best for readin yuh yuh |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ You fill my mind with some great images....love it  -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
absolutely whimsical and absolutely GREAT! YUH! P.S. i like the orange crayons, what's your favorite? ron |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
my favorite were the imaginary ones yuh less filling but thanx ron for baring your inner secrets kiddin yuh yuh and thank you too SEA (burp) oops there goes another orange oops there goes another orange crayola crayon!!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow - Walt, I found this piece to be very, um, "Waltesque". You really have to stop eating those paint flakes, man. Oh, and just to let you know, I let Ra do my rowing everyday - loved that line, btw. Michael |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 I like this one. There were some very interesting images that it created. I've just got one other thing to say! GET OFF MY MOON! ITS MINE AND I DON'T LIKE TO SHARE! |
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