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Whisper to Me
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Whisper to me Say the things I want to hear Speak it softly Let the words reflect your mind Listen to me I’m speaking to you with my eyes Hear the passion It goes beyond mere surface Want me To feel the beating of your heart To see you tremble As we touch Need me To place my hand around your waist Become a part of you And you a part of me Overwhelm me With all I long to feel That which I lack That which I crave Release me From the binds that hold Confining me to this darkness More than I have told Understand me Look deeper at me See more than what I show See that which I hide inside Whisper to me And in turn I’ll whisper to you Share the deepest of thoughts My deepest need compassion |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
very sweet and sensual---hmmm...ssshhh... A very tempting read here, Rich. Hugs. Love. and of course, much compassion... *wink* |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Spiked. It was beautifully expressed. I hope that someone is listening to you. Ron |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Spiked-I sense the compassion and much more, I like your style in writing this. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
SSHHHHHH...listen...can you hear me whisper? This was very sensual and sweet... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 do you hear my whispers.... ~~~~~  .....Charisma..... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you all so very much. I can feel you all for you have touched me in one way or another. Rich |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Spiked~ What a lovely write .. I love whispers ... they say so much. 'Whisper to me And in turn I’ll whisper to you Share the deepest of thoughts My deepest need compassion' Lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Spiked~ this is so hot....love it -SEA  |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Rich this is really beautiful. Very moving and well expressed. Juls |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This is truly a beautiful piece!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Marge, Sea,Juls and Cherie When the earth and the moon align right with the sun I come across a time where I actually am able to write something sensual. hope to have a realignment again soon lol thanks all. Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, guess what Rich! Tonight we've got a new moon in Scorpio aligning with the sun and mercury...you think that's enough? LOL... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Serenity is that why I have this strange craving tonite? Could well be Visious vision of a moon huh |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
'Understand me Look deeper at me See more than what I show See that which I hide inside' Oh, Rich, I'm speaking very softly....this is sooooooo lovely...I can hear you Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
shhhhu....whispers....I love when someone whispers to me.......loved it!!!!!!!!! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you peppermint and vandana whispers can change a mood Rich [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
This softly speaks such romantic longing. Beautiful. Much love all, Krissie |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank You AniKay83 Rich |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Spiked, this is soooo great I truly enjoyed the read it's such a treat to browse thru your poetry... Coco |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Rich excellent poem, there's something about a whisper, you've said it very quietly here but yet a whisper speaks loud and clear. |
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