Open Poetry #10 |
Before Love |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hark thou fair maiden I have come hither to defend thy honor And to protect thee from the Raven With my sword and shield I will defend thee And keep thee safe from harm And when 'tis over, 'twill be thee and me For love knoweth not the bonds of time It stretcheth beyond death and life And filleth the cup like the finest of wine For I have always known thee From that first sight above And now again, we shall be free To know what we knew. . .before love 2-28-2000 ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
the raven is but a purple fly bitten barnicle for thou art the most noble of them all ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Stunningly beautiful, Sven. Love like this..so rare.. Sandra |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sven, You are one fickle knight!! 'cause I just read you and you were laying your sword down, but that's okay..cause you write the purrriest love poems around, and Sven always wins my heart anyway.. Just beautiful! Marcy [This message has been edited by Alle'cram (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
To know what we knew...before love Ah, Sven, that is perfect! Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Oh great knight, tis a noble verse indeed. I will be your squire, carry your lance and shield, screen calls from your wenches, feed your stallion, if the pays good. This way i can meet the pretty maidens. just kidding! very noble indeed. Ron |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Lady Victoria, I thank thee my lady for thy response. . . thou hast made me smile. . . thank you. . . Lady Sandra, rare indeed. . . we shouldst all find love like this. . . Lady Marcy, thank you for thy response. . . and I am indeed not fickle. . . I am just choosy. . . Lady Tara, surely before love is where we all should be. . . thank you. . . Squire Ron, I am not in need of a Squire yet, as I have no wenches waiting, no stallion to feed and no wages to pay thee. . . but I will keep thy name handy if I doth have need for thee later. . . Thanks to thee my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Before love, I was lonely After love, I was alone. In love, I was whole. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Ye ken ye don't play fair Sir Sven. This damsel is in distress none of her past knights did this or are likely too...... Ye ken tis too beautiful for this lady's fluttering heart...... Isis *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sir Sven, as always this is magical. When I read the words.... For I have always known thee From that first sight above ....it brought back many special memories from the special man in my life, thank you for that. Juls |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Lady Tara. . . truer words were ne'er spoken. . . Lady Isis. . . perhaps my Lady, thou art in need of a new Knight? I thank thee for thy words. . . Lady Juliet. . . I am glad to have brought back memories to thee of someone special. . . thanks to thee for reading. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aye, Sire, dear, brave, heart... before love came thy honor and honor bound, thy trust to trust in thy love... so sip thee from this, thy cup of honeyed mead and tread ye softly among the silence of this love for I have always known ye to be thee...< !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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