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peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA

0 posted 2000-10-25 10:18 AM


I fly on wings of love
Flying high into the sun
But it cannot burn me
For I burn already with my love
Higher and higher it pushes me
Upward past the clouds
Sailing high overlooking the ground
My heart is lighter than air
Fantasy world, if this is fantasy
May I remain there forever
Reality is an illusion
This is more real to me
I am enfolded in arms of love
Held tightly in love's embrace
What more can one ask than this
Ah, there is that all consuming kiss
Hold me tighter love
I want to be one with you
I want all of you within me
Let us dance that wild dance
I want to learn you with my hands
Taste you with lips and tongue
Urge you on with body and voice
Take you where we both want to be
Let me look into your eyes
Let us reach the pinnacle together
And gently float back to earth
Together still as one
Briefly pausing now
Gathering our energies
Passion flares hot
And we're flying again

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

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Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

1 posted 2000-10-25 10:25 AM


You are such a romantic dreamer. beautiful feelings. Ron
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-10-29 09:23 AM


good heavens, I wish I had written this!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-10-29 09:27 AM


I am enfolded in arms of love
Held tightly in love's embrace
What more can one ask than this
Ah, there is that all consuming kiss
Hold me tighter love
I want to be one with you
I want all of you within me
Let us dance that wild dance
I want to learn you with my hands
Taste you with lips and tongue
Urge you on with body and voice
Take you where we both want to be
Let me look into your eyes
Let us reach the pinnacle together
And gently float back to earth
Together still as one
================
wow..i feel like i have been flying..
excellent writing ...
perfect the way you built this up...
love the sensual essence of it as well
intense and passionate ponderings
take care
jm

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
4 posted 2000-10-29 09:31 AM


Thanks, Ron, can I blame that on being a Cancer???

I'm glad you liked it, Kathleen

Thanks for reading and your most kind and encouraging words, JM; made my day!!!

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

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