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Last and Truest Love
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Last and Truest Love |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
There is love and love Is that word exclusive for one kind? I think not for love is always true But everything I thought I knew Changed the day that I met you I've been in love before But never felt anything like this You are my entire world; my life As a rose needs the rain So too do I need you My arms long to hold you I tremble at the thought of this To love you with all that I am Tenderly with all my heart Gently with all my soul Fiercely with all my passion The day loses its luster The night has no stars All things lose their flavor Unless they're shared with you Don't let fear rule your heart Accept the fullness of my love For it holds my entire self All that is the best in me All that I would ever want to be I freely give to you My last and truest love Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A heartfelt song to love. . . Wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'All that is the best in me All that I would ever want to be I freely give to you My last and truest love' Great poem, pepper! I love it!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Peppermint35, smooth and loving poem. It is great. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you Sven, SP, Kethry ... for reading and for the encouraging words. I appreciate them all!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
With a love such as this there be no need for another. What a wonderful poem of pure love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But everything I thought I knew Changed the day that I met you I've been in love before But never felt anything like this You are my entire world; my life As a rose needs the rain So too do I need you My arms long to hold you I tremble at the thought of this To love you with all that I am Tenderly with all my heart Gently with all my soul Fiercely with all my passion The day loses its luster The night has no stars All things lose their flavor Unless they're shared with you ================ pepper, this is EXCELLENT writing you have defined and expressed that intensity we feel when we are consumed by another... wonderful work here.. the strong emotions all dressed up in your lovley imagery i enjoyed this much take care jm |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Peppermint, hi. Such a pretty verse so full of devotion. Thank you ~ Rainydays |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you, Mark, kind sir!!! JM, I'm truly glad you liked it! Rainydays, thanks for stopping by and the kind words. Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well, if this isn't a true testament of love, I don't know what is! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes there is love and love.... and you have describe true love so well... well done Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, it is like this, and I hope you can keep this wonderful feeling close to your heart for a very long time. Sandra |
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