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In The Night
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In The Night |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Feeling around in the dark A light switch in the night Owls about, cool early morning About to come. Empty feeling, cups alone Meals not shared Since you have gone Doors unlocked Your return here I wait Staring at the latch Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ What a sadly haunting piece of writing. I could sense the anticipation ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I hope that someone special returns soon. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I hope that someone special returns soon. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Leave it unlocked "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Daniel, your scene captures, poetically, just what it is to wait and want and wonder. I enjoyed reading...thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
J.D., aside from the fact your miserable and heartbroken...this is a VERY strong piece.. 'staring at the latch'..now, take that latch and let it open up a wonderful world of love for you...good writing. Love, Marcy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know that feeling of emptiness, Daniel...will post a poem for you...hugzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I know this too, and waiting and staring at the phone. haunting memories. good write, Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Daniel, If it is real she will return . . .you never know. Nice work.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, Kitkat, Alle'cram, Ron, Irish Rose, Lone Wolf, Rainydays, and nakdthoughts, Thank you all so very much for your care and concerns. I needed so much support and you gave it all to me. The doors have reopened, and we are together again. Thank you all. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i just read where you are together again..i told you the sun would shine again..HUGSS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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