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Forever Again |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You asked me if I loved you And I had to stop and wonder why Cant you see it in my smiling face Or here shining in my eyes Then I got to thinking Why should you know its true If I dont take the time to speak And say these words to you I love you in the morning When the dew kisses the rose When songbirds greet the rising sun Thats when my heart always knows I love you at noontime With the sun high above my head When dishes need doing But I come to you instead I love you at twilight As the sunset blushes the night When the day drifts into darkness And you are my only light I'll love you til forever Thats a long long time they say But my heart knows you are my someone Til time just fades away I love you in the morning At noontime In the twilight of my years Forevers not that long To spend with you You chase away the fears I'll love you forever And ever Again |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
How beautiful and lyrical....this is what true love is all about.....must be soulmates!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* if he don't see how you love him.. oh my, than he is so blind.... you have translate your love so well, loved it. Charisma |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Paula-Oh, this is so beautiful, I will mark it for the future, very tender and heartfelt. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
If only we could live forever and love forever..nicely written Paula and I hope he sees it..  very lovely~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Peppermint...lol no soulmate...a dream mate maybe...thank you Charisma...well when I find him he will know...thanks Gemini...what a compliment...that you would want to come back...thank you Victoria...he will see it...someday he will...thank you |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, beautifully and superbly written. I love this, I really do. True love, now that is a prize, worth obtaining, and cherishing. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I'll love you forever And ever Again That clinched it. Beautiful. Ron |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very beautiful, Paula...great job! Nathan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A lovely poem Paula.  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marsha...yes it is...one I am still searchin for but I know its there...somewhere Ron...glad you found that the clincher...it kinda defined the whole poem Nathan...thank you friend PoetdeVine...thank you sweet lady...I appreciate your words |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Why should you know its true If I dont take the time to speak And say these words to you Paula, So true how love does reflect itself in our countenance...but so warming when those words are spoken. A charming read, enjoyable throughout. Robert Joseph |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
When you find him, and you will, tell him these sweet words and he will be yours forever and ever again. Oh, how I've longed to hear such a soulful expression of love. Love is the law, love under will. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Robert Joseph...soemtimes you just need to hear the words jlocke...cmere lets talk |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I think we want to hear it and see it...a combination of both surrounds us with Love...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very sweet love poem. I hope someday it comes true, for both of us, and anyone else that is longing for their true love. Foverer is a long time.. Sandra |
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