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spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-10-24 10:00 PM

I linger on
These empty days
Not knowing how
To change these ways

The sounds I heard
When once we spoke
The dreams we had
A heart now broke

Continues now
To crowd my mind
No will to look
No need to find

You were all
I thought I’d need
You were the love
My heart did feed

And now with thoughts
Of you and he
All I have left
Are memories
Of us.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-10-24 10:15 PM

Spiked~ this brought tears to my eyes........and hit me straight in the heart.

-SEA

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2000-10-24 10:19 PM

spiked-
   this just aches...such a
   sad write.  you have
   expressed these feelings well.

   -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-10-24 10:29 PM

You defintely broke MY heart. Hugs, lovie.

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

4 posted 2000-10-24 10:40 PM

sad, but it touches the heart, exactly like it should. Ron

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-10-24 11:00 PM

Oh, so sad. I guess you know I understand this emotion. Very nicely done.
Thanks for reading my poem, too.
Sandra

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

6 posted 2000-10-25 01:56 PM

Thank you all very much. Nice to have the ability to say things in such a way that it is understood.
Rich

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

7 posted 2000-10-25 02:17 PM

spiked-Sad and sweet, very tender and touching, I liked.

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

8 posted 2000-10-25 02:22 PM

Thanks for posting the poem, but it is sad that you have gone through such an experience as this.

Jon

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

9 posted 2000-10-25 10:34 PM

thank you Gemini and Jon all part of lifes lessons.
Rich

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

10 posted 2000-10-26 02:51 AM

Rich...sigh...all I can say is if ya want to talk I listen very well...this hurts...

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2000-10-26 04:38 AM

(((warm hugs)))

I was there too, and it isn't a nice place to be....hope you will feel better soon.

Take care Charisma

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

12 posted 2000-10-27 12:10 PM

Thank you charisma and Paula,
Nice to feel your hand on my shoulders in comfort.
Rich

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

13 posted 2000-10-27 01:10 AM

Spiked

This was an excellent write. Such heart-felt words. You expressed this elegantly and it made my heart go out to you. If this is actually true, I hope you feel better soon. I know broken hearts are so hard to mend.
Again, excellently penned.

Garfield

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

14 posted 2000-10-27 01:53 AM

Very well written; I can feel the pain in every word

I hope things are better.

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

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