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You're a Yuh Man
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You're a Yuh Man |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I don’t know about myself Always reinventing me Today I was educated Today of another time Today as in today I felt like blending in What are you thinking of When I tell you this Do you think as you nod The only important answer is Yes I can feel your pain Not so surprising I agree You are a yeah-man You are me of another time I am you of the same laid plans Would you like to be a grain of sand Or the twinkle in someone’s eye My son said sand's the thoughts of God And a twinkle never lasts I was educated I like to think That I am as smart as him. [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh walt... "sand is the thoughts of God, and a twinkle never lasts..." You always surprise me, in the nicest ways... that is truly lovely. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
A chip off the old block haa. Good one Walt ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
until you put the sands in an hourglass of course,,then they become the days of our lives.....as always you make us go "yuh". Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx guys yuh  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful Walt! BUMP! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Smiling here Walt ... very much enjoyed this gem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you ladies |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Delightful little tidbits of think. 'You are just a yeah-man You are me of another time I am you of the same laid plans Would you like to be a grain of sand' I think I would ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey Walt always making me smile This is great  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
tracie and marge woohoo!!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well I can't deny it, but yes I am smiling too....  enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx for thuh fuzzy skittle Charisma it was delish |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
You always bring a smile. Like someone above said, chip off the ole block (now I bet your grinning). Marcy |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Guess I'll just agree with everyone else...yuh. nice job. Ron |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Walt, ya did it again I like this one!!  Coco |
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