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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-10-24 06:28 PM


The Woman
That Could Give Me
So Much

What can I say,
"Please give me more."
And isn't that begging
a thought I abhor.
Yes I realize it's hard to
give feelings you possibly don't possess
yet if they dwell within your hearts desire
please go ahead and confess.
It not, that would be my problem
definately not yours.
I'll just have to muster up the courage
to let go and look to another
to provide the love I deserve.
Anyway my life is a definate mess
and thinking of the love I'm missing
has created a little too much stress.
So if that's your desire we can lose touch.
Looks like you are becoming
the woman that could give me so much
that doesn't appreciate me enough
to stay in touch.

Jameslee@October24,2000

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-10-24 06:37 PM


James~
If she is blind
then set her free
give your heart
to the likes of me

I will hold you gently
love you long
my heart could never
do you wrong

Find me,I'm waiting
just around life's bend
I'll be the heart that is true
with a love with no end.

-SEA-

She's out there James, you will find her.   -SEA

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-10-24 10:39 PM


Don't wait too long. If she can't tell you
that your the one, go find one who will.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-10-25 12:26 PM


James you know what you deserve and what you
want....and you have the strength within you
to wait until it comes...and it will because
of what you want to give in return.  This
was heartfelt and tender writing~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2000-10-25 12:54 PM


Hey my friend...you know and I know...you deserve the very best, so dont hang on to something that isnt, ok?
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-10-25 02:19 PM


Thank you Sea, inot, Butterflies and Paula...
When you have determined that you care for someone you also must give them the time and the benefit to give the same back to you...I want to give her every opportunity because she is worth it...yet this is a new relationship and I don't really know her that well and if she is not who I expected or responding as well as I would like this relationship could end just as quickly as it began...I sincerely hope that doesn't happen..still one can not fall in love all by themselves...the best policy is to give only as much as the other desires from you..so if she only wants to be my friend...I will make adjustments...James

Marsha
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6 posted 2000-10-25 02:35 PM


James, beautiful poem, very difficult time. I can only say what I truly believe that real love, true love, is worth any price. Whatever will be, will be, I'll keep my fingers crossed for you. (And if she really doesn't know what a true pize she has then maybe she's reaaly not the person you fell in love with.)
Take care
                 Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2004-10-16 12:53 PM


Thank you Marsha for the kind words...James
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