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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Time Laura Wells Time separates us, me and you I've never known a love to be more true My days pass slowly and painfully, each second I think of you I don't know how much longer I can live like this I just want to feel the touch of your kiss 1000 miles separate us and people too There is a certain person dear, who would kill, for me not to be with you We cannot let her stand in our way, we have to stand up and be strong Live our lives day by day The only thing that stops us is time So I ask you, when is the right time? [This message has been edited by ParisGrl (edited 10-24-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You'll know when the time is right...and you can't let others tell you what is right and what is wrong...follow your dreams and your heart...the rest will fall into place. Beautiful work~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
What time is it now? This is wonderful. . .from the heart. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A very good question, that only two people can answer..... Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'My days pass slowly and painfully, each second I think of you' Beautiful write! Don't let anything stand in your way! I loved this!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
ParisGrl, Well done, this is straight from the heart. It will all work out in time, keep working at it. "we have to stand up and be strong Live our lives day by day" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, I hope the right time comes to you, and it all goes the way you hope. I liked the flow and the emotion here. Sandra |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Laura-- well sweetie you ask this question to me...and seems i don't have the right answer. all i know is i love you and i will fight with you. and when the time is right, we'll both know. just hold onto the love we have, the faith and our Lord. Beautiful poem! Love, ~me~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
BUMP  sorry i had to! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hi Laura I must say you are very determined with time getting in your way and 1000 miles and a certain person wanting to kill you...ha..close is nice...I prefer women that are more available and perhaps 20 miles is a nice radius and of course I don't want anyone waiting to kill me...ha...sometimes they can be only minutes away and still not be emotionally available...interesting writing with lots of variables...James |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Hi, I'm sorry but i don't have the time to address each of you but I want to thank you all for supportintg me. I'm glad that ya'll ;-) liked the poem. James, I love challenges. ;-) |
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